顾家北微信推送词伙 2014年10月.docx

顾家北微信推送词伙 2014年10月
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Some experts believe thatit is better for children begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
观点类文章
开头段
Traditionally, children have begun studying foreign languages at secondary school, but introducing them earlier is mended by some educationalists. This policy has been adopted by some educational authorities or individual schools, with both positive and negative es.
学习点1:这个开头段是两句话,和我们上课说的一样。背景句的写法是描述一个趋势,也是我们的路数。
学习点2:这个开头段没有表明立场,只是说了正面和负面的影响都有。也回应了很多同学的问题:“观点类文章要不要给出立场?”
学习点3:一些词伙: at secondary school, 在中学
educational authorities,政府教育部门
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今天推送的是part3的一个思路和答案,大家是不是发现这个题目的词伙和观点可以用在今天的作文考题?
What sorts of jobs are most popular with young people in your country?
观点1:在国有企业工作state-owned enterprises
原因:稳定的收入 steady e
结果:生活不错enjoy a high quality of life
观点2:在小公司工作small-to-medium enterprises
原因:更大的空间发展more opportunities for self-actualisation
结果:有成就感a sense of fulfillment
观点1:many young people may choose to work for state-owned enterprises or government departments.
原因:because these jobs can offer them steady e
结果:so they can enjoy a high quality of life
观点2:on the other hand, more and more young people may also prefer to work for small-to-medium enterprises in the private sector
原因:panies give them more opportunities for self-actualisation, for example, giving them participating in the decision making process about how to develop new products.
结果:they will have a sense of fulfillment
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开头段
The pie pare the proportions of people falling into three distinct age groups inYemen and Italy in two different years.
学习点1:题目是the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy, 而Simon 的改写是“the proportions of people falling into….”
学习点2:其他部分的改写,譬如说pie charts,而不是题目的charts,其实都是很简单的。
概述
It is clear that Italy had the older population in the year 2000,and that the same is predicted for the year populations of both