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中考英语书面表示复习专题(2)
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“此篇书面表示属于提要式写作。写作内容，写作时关键就应放在结构安排及语言组织上。试卷紧密结合当前热点时事，话题为“全民健身”，比较新奇。
此篇提醒作文首次以问题为提醒和向导，控制中又含有一定开放，考生具备一定审题能力和遣词造句表示能力就有话可说，但写好这篇作文，不能只简单地回答下列问题，需要一定发挥，视整篇文章内容充实，意思连贯。
“全民健身”问题一直是备受关注热点之一，因平时练习较多，而且题中写作关键点大都以及给出，所以考生只要注意语词选取，句子框架搭建，紧紧围绕关键点作适当发挥，把抽象内容详细化，灵活利用，卷面整齐，当然内容要包含题目关键点，尤其是自己体会和观点。如能鲜明独到，基本上可拿高分。
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（1）词汇：
do sports, favorite,play fotball (basktball, volleyball,ping-pong ete), energtic, take part in,healthy,keep fit,active
(2)句式：
①It’s very good for us and is also can make us healthy.
②To do more sports can help our studies.
③My favourite sport is playing ping-pong.
④To do morning exercises is also can make our much healthier.
⑤What’s more, a healthy body can help us stdy better and live a happier life
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（1）安排以上信息点在文中逻辑关系。
（2）用所掌握词汇、词组、固定句型将全部信息点表示在文章中。
(3)注意提取主要信息，并加以整合，无须面面俱到。
（4）文章中加入个人观点。
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Let’s do sports
Nowadays,most of us do not pay attention to doing sports.
In fact,doing sports is really important in our daily life. I think doing sports can build up our strength, give us more power and make us energetic. It can burn a lot of fat in our body. You know too much fat can cause lots of diseases. I often take an active part in the ball games, running,and jumping on the playground .I like playing football very much. I often watch a football match on Tv on Sundays. Whenever I have time, I am always playing sports with my parents or friends on the ground. After that, I usually feel excited and energetic.
Besides,some sports can make us brave and insistent. So, why not do sports?
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满分揭秘：“全民健身日” 是一个标杆，是一个推进力。本文回答了题中五个问题，作者审题准，入题快， 首先导入doing sports is really important in our daily ，关键点清楚。另外，作者在遣词造句能力强，语法知识扎实。比如： I think ，Whenever I have time， build up our strength ，make us energetic， take an active part in ，make us brave and insistent等，防止重复，展现了语言多样化。复合句多处使用，提升了文章档次，使文章亮点倍出，风采非凡，值得其它同学效仿。
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Let’s do sports
Sports are very meaningful for our life, our society and even our world. It’s so important for everyone to do sports. Because it’s very good for us and is also can make us healthy. We have a lot of choices of sports, basetball, soccer, tennis , etc. My favourite sport is playing ping-pong. I often play ping-pong with my friends and parents after class. After that, I usually feel active and powerful.
To do more sports can help our studies. To ride a bike is a sport. To walk to school is a sport as well. To do morning exercises is also can make our much healthier. Doing sports, I think, is one of the best way to teach us to be brave and strong. Doing sports is a good way to relax and keep fit. What’s more, a healthy body can help us study better and live a happier life.
Doing sports is fun,and what you need to do is just try to play and join it!
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满分揭秘：
文章内容涵盖题干中所给出全部关键点，“全民健身日”，让我们一起享受体育运动带来健康与欢乐这一观点一直贯通全文。作者以严谨结构，复杂而准确句子清楚而明了表示了自己要表示意思，比如： Because it’s very good for us and is also can make us healthy. Doing sports is a good way to relax and keep fit. 等，层次分明，行文连贯，适当 使用精准过渡词，给人一气呵成之感。总之，不论是结构安排，还是语言表示，都足以显示出作者扎实英语语言功底和驾驭语言能力，是一篇值得推荐佳作。
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标准范文：
let’s do sports
I think it’s very important for everyone to do sports.
I like sports because they are not only good for our health but also good for my study. My favorite sport is swimming. Whenever I am free, I will have a swim with my friends or my parents in the swimming pool.
After swimming, I usually feel happy and relaxed. What’s more, I can put more energy into my study.
so let’s do sports, and we will become stronger and stronger.
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