高英(1).ppt

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Group1:
庞倩
常雅茹
辛青青
王婉伊
translation
然而这仅仅是问题的一方面。另外,不容忽视的是由于社会发展不断加速,代沟问题越来越明显。现在的三十岁的年轻人,爱好和习惯都截然不同,更不用二十岁的年轻人了。由于仍受到自己年轻时的爱好和习惯的影响。老一辈常常以为他们的那些(习惯和爱好)才是绝对真理,而且拒绝给孩子自主创新的权利,而那也是他们年轻时强烈要求从自己的父母得到的。因此,关于跳舞或裤子应该多宽的非实质性冲突会激化为事关尊严的大事。
Study the model and explain how coherence and unity is improved by the use of transitional devices?
coherence is a state or situation in which all the parts or ideas fit together well so that they form a united whole 统一;一致性;连贯性
 Unity is the state of different areas or groups being joined together to form a single country anization联合(状态);统一(状态;统一性
What is coherence and unity?
What is transitional devices?
Transitional devices are like bridges between parts of your paper. Transitional devices are words or phrases that help carry a thought from one sentence to another, from one idea to another, or from one paragraph to another.
过渡手段;承接手段;过渡手法; 转折语
1) Transitional words and expressions:
But…...another……still…...hence……
2) Pronoun reference:
those, their, these, they.
3) Repetition of important words:
tastes and habits, young people
Writing Transitions
Good transitions can connect paragraphs and turn disconnected writing into a unified whole. Instead of treating paragraphs as separate ideas;
Transitions can help readers understand how paragraphs work together, reference one another, and build to a larger point.
Transitional devices link sentences and paragraphs together smoothly so that there are no abrupt jumps or breaks between ideas.
Here is a list of mon transitional devices that can be used to cue readers in a given way.
To Add:
and, again, and then, besides, equally important, finally, further, furthermore, nor, too, next, lastly, what's more, moreover, in addition, first (second, etc.)
pare:
whereas, but, yet, on the other hand, however, nevertheless, on the contrary, parison, where, compared to, up against, balanced against, vis-à-vis, but, although, conversely, meanwhile, after all, in contr