雅思 中英文写作.ppt

Revision: 中英文写作比较:
①思维模式 Thinking pattern
汉语迂回型英语线性思维
circular linear
②语言与语气(Language and Tone)
汉语 direct 英语 indirect
③客观性与公正性(objectivity and fairness)
汉语 subjective 英语 objective
④意合与形合(Inner Correlation and External Form and Structure)
汉语: 意合英语:形合
友情提示
三大禁忌,八项注意,六个不为
禁忌:
① With the development of science and technology…
② Every coin has two sides.
③ Word by word translation
注意:
①不用写题目②一寸空白
③齐头式④10~12个字一行
⑤书法(草写) ⑥结构匀称
⑦错字⑧标点
不为:
①中英对抗②口语化
③缩写④英式英语与美语混用
⑤结构失调⑥逻辑性差
五步走:
审题:Analyze the task
构思:Brainstorming process
写提纲:Framework
写作正文:Writing
检查错误:Check
1)main point 2)topic sentence
3)sentence variety 4) Grammar
5)Spelling 6)conjunction
7)Chinglish
Objectives of today’s class
pletion of today’s class, students should understand how do the following two criteria work in IELTS’ writing.
variety

variety

1)用词
①用词多样化
“重要”important, vital, significant, crucial
“不能”can not do, fail to do, be unable to do
“不同的”distinct, distinctive, different, not the same
②尽量用复杂的词汇
户外活动有助于……
Outdoor activities are good to people’s health.
helpful/ beneficial/conducive
2)常用词:
v. adj. adv. n. conj. 名言和谚语
①Every man has his liking. 人各有所好。
②Time and tide waits for no man. 时不待人。
③Two heads are better than one.
三个臭皮匠赛过诸葛亮。
④The onlooker sees the game best. 旁观者清。
⑤Live and learn. 吃一堑,长一智。
3)引用谚语:
Just as the saying goes
As the proverb goes,“……”.
A Selection of Famous Quotations
Culture: The love of beauty is an essential part of all healthy human nature. —John Quskin, American writer and critic.
The value of culture is its effect on character. It avails nothing unless it ennobles and strengthens that. Its use is for life. Its aim is not beauty but goodness.
— Somerset Maugham, British novelist
Education:
Better be unborn than untaught, for ignorance is the root of misfortune.
— Plato, Ancient Greek Philosopher
Education has for its object the formation of character.
— Herbert Spencer, British philosopher
Education is the tran