雅思小作文写作.doc

Writing Notes
Date: July, 9th, 2017
Task I
Three Types
Data: Bar Chart, Line Graph, Table, Pie Chart
图表类型:动态图、静态图
动态图:有两个或以上时间
重点
趋势
特殊值:起点、重点、最高点、最低点、交叉点
静态图:只有一个或者没有时间
比较描述对象:使用倍数、比较级
Process: Flow Chart
Map
Describe the change
Eg: Hospital is located to the west of car park
评分标准
Task Achievement/ Task Response
Cover the Requirements of the task
No off topics
不能添加主观想法,只能描述
Coherence and Cohesive
使用路标性词汇:顺承和转折
Lexical Resource
使用非高频词汇
Use words and phrases naturally and appropriately
Vocabulary diversity
Accurate spelling words
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
Accurate grammar of sentences
Use different ranges of sentences, structures to achiever grammatical
写作方法
开头段
图表词改写
The chart : bar chart, line chart, pie chart, table, diagram
动词shows改写
注意时态
Shows: illustrates, gives information about, compares, indicates, demonstrates
关键词(一定要改写)
数量改写
The number of + 可数
The amount of + 不可数
The quantity of + 可/不可数
The figure for + 可/不可数
百分比改写
The percentage of : the proportion of
句式变化
Compares + 不同事物+ in terms of + 相同事物
名词变化
Expending : expenditure
地点(可以不改写)
时间可以改写
From 1980 to 2000: between 1980 and 2000, during the period from 1980 to 2000, over the period of 20 years, over a 20-year period
EG: The bar pares three types of telephone calls in terms of the amount of time spent in the UK between 1995 and 2002.
主段写法
第一段: 起点数值对比+ 部分趋势
第二段:剩下趋势+ 终点值对比
数字三种表述方法
数值放在句首
EG: 60 million tonnes of goods were transported by road in the UK.
数值放在句末
Stand at = be; stood at = was = totalled
EG: The amount of goods transported by road in the UK was 60 million tonnes.
There Be 句型
EG: There were 60 billion tonnes of goods transported by road in the UK.
parisons
“ compared to”, “ compared with”, “ parison with”+ 短语
EG: 6% of single aged person lived in poverty, compared to only 4% of aged couple
“while”, “ whereas”+ 句子
EG:6% of single aged person lived in poverty, while the proportion of aged couple living in poverty was 4%.
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