范文:efamiliesarebetterequippedtodealwithdifficultiesposedbythe‘realworld’-evident,butinfactrequirecloserexamination.(58words)点评:1+1’模式,最后1句为主题句。此段的主题句稍微有点特殊,它的确否定了前面所提到的观点,从而表达出了自己的观点,此外还引出了下文。特别是最后半句:butinfactrequirecloserexamination,感觉是在抛砖引玉。Thepopularwisdomisthatchildrenofpoorerfamilieslearnearlyonthevalueofabuck,,thechildrenofwealthyfamilies,thosebornwithasilverspoonintheirmouths,pletelyignorantofthevalueofmoney,,thoughlogical,overlooksonekeypointwhichis,ofcourse,education.(100words)点评:1’+3模式,第1句是主题句。请注意,从此段的内容来看,这是个让步段(即分析自己并不赞成的观点)。虽然4段论的作文的主体段是两面讨论,但是本人还是喜欢这样的写作,即主体段的观点还是有侧重的,把让步段放在前面,最后1句话引出下一段,这样过度地很自然,而且自己的观点也比较明确!Thebasisofthisargumentis,ofcourse,knowingthevalueofmoney,andtheideathatchildrenofthepoorknowthis,,isinabetterpositiontoteachtheirchildrenthevalueofmoney;someoneskilledinearningandkeepingit,thewealthyparent,orsomeonewhocannotseemtoacquireit,thepoorparent?Bothwealthyandpoorchildrenareequallylikelytoacquireaneducationinmoney,whetherit
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