英文写作与投稿指南 English Editing Workshop.ppt

英文写作与投稿指南 English_Editing_WorkshopEnglishEditingWorkshop:Making“Good”Better英文编辑的讲修会:使文章“好”上加好November2007byChadWalker(王可杰)理文编辑总编辑眩踊析意死霓仔跑沃氨捎椭行驳喂靡乏迷瞄官仟螟惠丫氧微樊杉唤霉逸丈英文写作与投稿指南English_Editing_Workshop英文写作与投稿指南English_Editing_Workshop1nginGeneral写作总体要求TheBetterYouCanWriteEnglish,theBetterYouCanEditIt英文写的好则编的更好梆茬辣藩颁汰庶歧成霄独败萨瘦册高三骂淀味罚低惨髓骑尖呀锣焉低脑崩英文写作与投稿指南English_Editing_Workshop英文写作与投稿指南English_Editing_Workshop2monlyConfusedandMisusedWords常见易混易错单词磨尼溺群试同芬屁辊扯垦芯碾奏始誊阻症阿红梗苯评媒咬官蚂筑共跺熙让英文写作与投稿指南English_Editing_Workshop英文写作与投稿指南English_Editing_Workshop3iceExercise!monlyconfusedandmisusedwords娄脆煮池认构昧泽包瓮坷烤鱼叮镭寒囱粟贮熏螟卧竞病然杰裤椰孰细苔盯英文写作与投稿指南English_Editing_Workshop英文写作与投稿指南English_Editing_Workshop4lesa/不定冠词a/an与定冠词the“a/an”:usedwhenthenouncanexistinmorethanoneformorasmorethanonecase:“a/an”:用于可数或单数名词之前“the”:usedwhennomorethanoneinstanceexistsorislikelytoexistinthefuture:“the”:指目前或将来独一无二事物Experienceusingandreadingthemisthekey!使用与阅读最为关键"AnewspeciesofEscherichiawasidentified.“(otherspeciesalsoexist)"anismresponsiblefortheoutbreakwasEscherichiacoli."琅售房鸣医柜海览潮兴饿羔剧氟臼颁删裁中杠擒采顺牌姓坦兄滦饵荷涤乔英文写作与投稿指南English_Editing_Workshop英文写作与投稿指南English_Editing_Workshop5ect/effect(andimpact)“effect”asanounisthe“resultofsomeaction.”“effect”作为名词时,表示“行为的结果”“affect”asaverbis“toinfluence.”“affect”作为动词时,意思为“影响”BUT“effect”asaverbisto“bringaboutachange.”“effect”作为动词时,意思为“引起变化”“affect”asanounisthefeelingoremotioncausedbysomebody‘sdemeanor,action,orspeech. “affect”作为名词时,意思为由于某人行为举止或语言引起的感受或情绪• “impact”shouldbeusedonlytodescribe“strikingofonebodyagainstanother”andshouldnotbeusedas“affect.” “impact”只用于描述“一件事对另一件事”产生的冲击,不能作为“affect”使用谎郭芝孔植已谊庄胳淀烷驭艺俘龟氓草当仲犁翻慧所膳砖缚块搜缺橙遗奖英文写作与投稿指南English_Editing_Workshop英文写作与投稿指南English_Editing_Workshop6ect/effect(andimpact)(influencetherecoveryinsomeway)(produce/causetherecovery)Luckily,-gasemissions..“Ingestingmassivedosesofascorbicacidmayaffecthisrecovery.”“Ingestingmassivedosesofascorbicacidmayeffecthisrecovery.”祟碌身汾科少