英语图片作文修改2.ppt

Picture writing 同济中学高海蓉简要描述图片内容,就图片主题谈谈自己感想。你们让我自己骑好吗? Three steps to write the beginning of a picture writing i) Describe the ___________ . ii) Relate the _________ to a certain ____________ iii) Present your ___________ picture picture phenomenon opinion 简要描述图片内容,就图片主题谈谈自己感想。 Useful skills to describe a picture , , , As we can see in the picture, … As is vividly shown in the picture, … In the picture, Useful skills to introduce a phenomenon …时 2. …是很普遍的 3. 最近…现象引起了广泛的关注 When es to … It’ mon that … Recently the phenomenon has aroused wide concern that … Useful skills to present your opinion ?就我而言 In my opinion/In my view/As far as I ’ m concerned/From my point of view ?我认为 I hold the view/opinion that … I ’ m of the opinion that … I think/believe/consider that …?我的理由如下 My reasons are listed as follows. The following are my reasons. Practice writing the first paragraph Write a clear beginning of a composition, following the 3 steps. picture phenomenon opinion briefly reasonably clearly Polish the beginning Step I Step 2 Step 3 Describe the picture briefly . Relate the picture to a certain phenomenon reasonably. Present your opinion clearly Polish the beginning _______________________ , when a young girl was riding a bike, almost all her family members were around, protecting her __________ anything unexpected should happen, which did _______ the girl as she really wanted to manage it herself. It ’ s a common _________ that parents care too much about their children. ________________, I don ’ t think it wise for parents to _________________________. My reasons are_____________: AS is vividly shown in the picture in case annoy phenomenon As far as I ’ m concerned overprotect their children listed as follows (首先) __________________, too much love from parents will __________________ a child and ______________________________( 使孩子很难)to _____________________ with other