英文审稿意见汇总.doc

英文审稿意见汇总
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以下 12 点无轻重主次之分。每一点内容由总结性标题和代表性审稿人意见构成。
1、目标和结果不清晰。
It is noted that your manuscript needs careful editing by someone with expertise in technical English editing paying particular attention to English grammar, spelling, and sentence structure so that the goals and results of the study are clear to the reader.
2、未解释研究方法或解释不充分。
◆ In general, there is a lack of explanation of replicates and statistical me thods used in the study. ◆ Furthermore, an explanation of why the authors did these various experiments should be provided.
3、对于研究设计的 rationale:
Also, there are few explanations of the rationale for the study design.
4、夸张地陈述结论/夸大成果/不严谨：
The conclusions are overstated.
For example, the study did not show
if the side effects from initial copper burst can be avoid with the polymer formulation.
5、对 hypothesis 的清晰界定：
A hypothesis needs to be presented。
6、对某个概念或工具使用的 rationale/定义概念：
What was the rationale for the film/SBF volume ratio?
7、对研究问题的定义：
Try to set the problem discussed in this paper in more clear,
write one section to define the problem
8、如何凸现原创性以及如何充分地写 literature review:
The
topic
is
novel
but
the
application
proposed
is
not
so
novel. 9、对 claim,如 A＞B 的证明，verification:
There is no experimental comparison of the algorithm with previously known work, so it is impossible to judge whet