中考英语 写作飞越1.doc

中考英语 写作飞越1.doc初中写作飞越
Part I片段仿写一
片段1
If you like people, and if you like to travel, being a tour guide is the best.
结构提炼
If ••• , and if • , • , being a is the best.
If ••• , if ••• doing is
结构分析
上面的结构可以用来给建议，也可以用来说明原因。前面的两个if结构对情况进行了 假设，后面给出了结果，在句式和气势上都很有说服力和感染力。
写作指导
写作时，请同学们注意前后分句的逻辑关系。前面的两个假设必须能充分概况后面所提 事物的特点；不然生搬硬套范文结构的话，反而会显得莫名其妙。同时要注意后面的分句式 用doing作主语的。如果你所建议的是做什么事情，一定要记得动词变形。
实战练习
You like mountain climbing a lot. You are telling others why you think it' s a nice choice.
If , and if
is .
Do you like to live in the city or in the country?
Give your reasons.
You want to ask your friend to take part in the Super Girl Contest.
片段2
To cook dinner well is not easy. First of all, we need to prepare all the food and cooking tools before we begin cooking.
结构提炼
To (well) is not easy. First of all, we need to
结构分析
本片段说，烧好菜不容易。首先，烧菜前我们需要做的是准备好材料和炊具。
写作指导
很多事情做起来都是不容易的，譬如说烧菜。烧菜要做些什么事情？ to do sth是一个 不定式结构，当主语使用to do sth. is •••做什么事情怎么样，后面经常用描述性的形 容词，譬如good, bad, terrible, wonderful等等。有很多事例可以证明to do sth is not easy。"first of all”是“首先”的意思，就讲了这事“难”做的最显而易见的理由。英 语中first of all是个很常用的短语，可以用于说明文，也可以用于议论文，后面紧跟不 容易的原因。
实战练习
What do you think of buying a computer or something else?
What do you need to buy?
To well is not easy. First of all, we need to
What do you think of learning English?
Is it easy for you?
What shall we do if we want to learn English well?
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