托福英语写作技巧.docx

致污染，判卷人会觉得：为什么工厂就会导致污染呢?逻辑跳动太大了，托福作为就是给一个6岁小孩讲道理，所以要像照看小孩子一样对待阅卷人，逻辑绽开肯定要一步一步的来。
　　其实，到这里说理部分就结束了，呈现了你的思索问题的逻辑结构。后面的“假如没有”，“引用例子，数据”之类的都是增加文采，扩充文字的，依据时间长短，自己随意挑两到三样加上去即可。
　　1 引用例子：the example of__ matches my point of view perfectly; to look for better illustration， one can look no further than___; one case in point involves___， 自己编一个例子即可，可以是真的，也可以是编的，甚至是自己生活中的。引用例子的时候参考一下上面的句型，别总用for example 和such as










　　2 引用“权威”调查和数据。a recent survey， revealing that___ can also serve to demonstrate this point; a research， in which__ were investigated， suggests that____. 调查和数据都是自己编的，别太离谱就行了。
　　3 假如没有： seldom can we imagine the situation without___; hundreds of years ago， when there was no__， people_(生活多么麻烦和困难)__
　　下面是一个详细例子：
　　第一句knowledge obtained from books is more diverse and has larger quantity. (论点)
　　其次句正面阐述对象特征books are written form of documentation of facts and phenomenon， which， although obtained through numerous efforts， can be put down in only a few simple words. therefore， compared to practicing，比较兼插入 reading books can bring people numerous amounts of knowledge in a more convenient and efficient way.










　　后面的随意捡两样。假如没有hardly can we imagine the situation without those concise expressions of ideas. without the benefits of books， the brilliant ideas of predecessors will be lost due to the lack of recording; students will have no material to go over when they are faced with examinations; all the essence and beauty of poems and novels will never be appreciated by the descendents.(排比，是一个亮点，假如考场想不起来可以不写的)
　　引用例子m