托福写作高分范文(12).docx

http:// toefl . 1 托福写作高分范文( 12 ) Do you agree or disagree: all school teachers should be required to takecourses every five years to update their knowledge. () 题型:比较论点:让步角度:利弊分析开头:同意所有教师每 5 年就要去参加培训以更新知识。(话题引入+某一派的观点/做法+ 我的观点及过渡) The remarkable progress of society embodiesnot only in the prosperity of economy, but also in the explosion of concepts and ideas have been emerging one after another, which profoundly influenceall walks of life including the field of education. Faced with such a trend, someschool authorities require their teachers to take courses every 5 years in orderto keep abreast of the times. Opinions are divided and personally speaking, I ama big fan of this policy. My reasons and examples are given b elow. ( 88字) 中间段 1: 教师定期上课进修能更新自身的教学法, 以更好地教育学生。(主题句+解释+ 细节扩展) Firstly, taking courses ona regular basis isconducive to updating teachers ’ teaching methodology. The evolution of people ’ sperception of the nature of education demands that the old- -‐ fashioned wayof educating should be always updated and improved. In the courses, teachers aregiven the opportunity to learn to employ the new and more efficient teaching example, in the past, a good teacher was deemed as someone who could essfullycram the knowledge into the minds of students and help the m get a high score inexams. But today, people begin to realize the import