批改网精美托福写作（2）.docx

新东方批改网精美托福写作（2）
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　　Education is a typical example of this situation. The government plans to invest about 3% of all tax income on education this year, which is much less than the educational allocation of all the developed countries. We are all aware that education is one of the most essential basics of a country’s development, and even though the government would like to make public transportation free, we should call for them to invest this money into education, especially basic education.
　　In addition, the current cost of public transportation is very low and almost everyone can afford this, as the elderly and disabled are able to be offered a much lower price.
　　In Hangzhou, the highest price for taking a bus is 4 yuan person, which even a beggar can afford. On the other hand, more and more people have cars the price of which is decreasing rapidly People, who hate the noise and fumes in buses and taxis, would prefer to drive themselves to the places they want to go. Thus, more and more people buy cars today for their convenience and abandon public transportation. In this situation, it seems that whether the public transportation is free, does not matter much.


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