英文审稿意见.doc

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在比较高级别的会议、期刊等,评审系统中包括给编辑的和给作者的评审意见。本文就这两部分评审以及进行汇总
第一部分:给作者的审稿意见
1、目标和结果不清晰。
ItisnotedthatyourmanuscriptneedscarefuleditingbysomeonewithexpertiseintechnicalEnglisheditingpayingparticularattentiontoEnglishgrammar,spelling,andsentencestructuresothatthegoalsandresultsofthestudyarecleartothereader.
2、未解释研究方法或解释不充分。
◆Ingeneral,thereisalackofexplanationofreplicatesandstatisticalme
thodsusedinthestudy.
◆Furthermore,anexplanationofwhytheauthorsdidthesevariousexperiments
shouldbeprovided.
3、对于研究设计的rationale:
Also,therearefewexplanationsoftherationaleforthestudydesign.
4、夸张地陈述结论/夸大成果/不严谨:
,thestudydidnot
algorithmisanimprovementonpreviouswork.
10、严谨度问题:
MNQiseasierthantheprimitivePNQS,howtoprovethat.
11、格式(重视程度):
◆Inaddition,"InstructionsforAuthors"whichshowsexamples.
◆,pleaseconsulttheformattingnstructionstoauthorsthataregivenunderthe"InstructionsandForms"buttoninheupperright-handcornerofthescreen.
12、语言问题(出现最多的问题):
有关语言的审稿人意见:
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◆Theauthorsmusthavetheirworkreviewedbyapropertranslation/reviewingservicebeforesubmission;.
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nEnglishorwhosenativelanguageisEnglish.
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rofyourpapergooverthepaperandcorrectit.?
◆thequalityofEnglishneedsimproving.
来自编辑的鼓励:
Encouragementfromreviewers:
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eneditedbecausethesubjectisinteresting.
◆Thereiscontinuedinterestinyourmanuscripttitled"……"whichyousubm
ittedtotheJournalofBiomedicalMaterialsResearch:PartB-AppliedBiomat
erials.
◆TheSubmissionhasbeengreatlyimprovedandisworthyofpublication.
,,,Icantfigureoutthelegendsasitistoosmall!Howdoesyoureffortcompareswithstate-of-the-art? 
,,?Whichcomponentisthemostimportant?Anyfurtherimprovement?
theauthorshouldconcentratedonthenewalgorithmwithyourideaandexplaineditsadvantagesclearlywithamostsimplewords.
itisgoodconcept,butneedtopolishlayout,language.
,thepaperisaccompaniedbyanadequatesetofexperimentsforevaluatingtheeffectivenessofthesolutionstheauthorspropose.
Apparently,Obviously,Innovation,refine,Inmyhumbleopinion
如果仍然有需要修改的小毛病,一般你可以用
.....accordingtoreviewcomments.
如果是接受,你可以用
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建议去小木虫问问,那里有一些资源。
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感想:一篇好的论文,从内容到形式都需要精雕细琢。
附1:中译审稿意见
审稿意见—1
(1)英文表达太差,尽管意思大致能表达清楚,但文法错误太多。
(2)文献综述较差,观点或论断应有文献支持。
(3)论文读起来像是XXX的广告,不知道作者与XXX是否没有关联。
(4)该模式的创新性并非如作者所述,目前有许多XX采取此模式(如美国地球物理学会),作者应详加调查并分析XXX运作模式的创新点。
(5)该模式也不是作者所说的那样成功……(审稿人结合论文中的数据具体分析)