119英语作文策略 润色作文打造高分.ppt

My Understanding About My Job.
Teaching is a demanding but rewarding job.
Compared with other subjects, English , in my
opinion , is more interesting. We English teachers
should be the envy of all the other teachers.
Besides, with so many laid off people nowadays,
we should be content . Therefore , do what we
can to make our teaching enjoyable and our job
worthwhile. Having taught for 25 years , I’ll never
regret to have chosen teaching as my job.
争分夺秒,做好“实”字文章
对症下药,多下“点拨”功夫
查漏补缺;不搞题海战役
考前两个月
写作提高的空间最大
写作登堂入室之途经

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注重多种训练
“润色”作文,打造高分(地区获奖论文)
(一). 写好开头,先声夺人
(二). 巧用修辞,展示文采
(三). 英汉各异,注重得体
(四). 言贵简洁,遣词贴切
(五). 巧用名言,画龙点睛
(六). 变通办法,畅开思路
(七). 上下连贯,过渡自然
(八). 圆满收尾, 突出主题
小标题
书写要求
务要工整规范,切忌龙飞凤舞;
不得轻看标点,坚持“双十”原则
切记:高考平均一分钟批改一份,
书写认真之重要不言而喻。
突出思想性
拓展合理性
行文逻辑性
表达得体性
首尾一致性
好作文的标准
突出思想性
文章不是无情物。是文章就该有一个主题(topic)。
要么弘扬一种精神;表明一种态度;表达一种情感。
传递一种信息等。它是文章中心思想的升华。
避免“下笔千言,离题万里”,
例:
假如你是李华,在最近的研究性学习当中,受《21世纪中学生英语报》(The 21st Century)之邀,你对你所在的班60名同学(男女各半)进行了上网目的的调查。现将调查结果(如下表所示)用英语给报社的编辑写一封信,报道此事,以引起舆论的关注,并提出你的观点和建议。
摘自学生习作:
1. What delights me most is that 13%
of boys and 13% of girls study on the .
2. As can be seen from the graph, an equal number
of boys and girls prefer to study on the
. It can’t be denied that studying on the
is of benefit to them because it enables
us to broaden our horizon.
上述表达根本忽视了写作的思想性,却不知思想性乃文章之灵魂。
can be seen from the graph, an equal number
of boys and girls prefer to study on the .
It can’t be denied that studying on the is
of benefit to them because it enables us to broaden
our horizon. But unfortunately, only such a small
number of students surf the with the
purpose of studies. (主题句)
本文应该突出的主题为: