注重写作句式提高表达能力.ppt

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注重写作句式
提高表达能力
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——Jiashan senior high school 沈雪芳
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2012年浙江省普通高考考试说明对写作的要求：
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清楚、连贯地传递信息，表达意思；
有效运用所学语言知识。
要求考生根据提示，用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文。提示形
式有图画、图表、文字等。满分30分。
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一、明确高中各年级段写作的要求：
2012年浙江省英语高考调研卷的作文：
2012年浙江省英语高考调研卷的作文范文：
Too Much Care Spoils a Child
As is shown in the picture above, the plant is being ruined by too much watering. Perhaps, people do this out of good intentions, but good intentions may not necessarily bring about good results.
Like the plant in the picture, childern today receive too much care. For example, parents tend to do almost everything for their childern, from making beds to carrying school bags. By dong this , they are trying to show their love for their childern in their best possible way. They believe what they do will make their children’s life easier and better. However, what children really need is to experience difficulties and take challenges so that they can grow up to be more independent. Too much water kills a plant, and too much care spoils a child.
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优秀书面表达的5个要求：

一篇优秀的书面表达首先就是一件艺术品，书写清楚，字母大小匀称，单词间距适当，没有明显修改痕迹。

一篇好的书面表达不能一段到底，应有合理的段落层次，让人感觉条理清晰。每一段落要有一个主题句和几个支撑句。

从书面表达的评分标准看，运用高级词汇对提高书面表达的"档次"和得分至关重要。

句式单一、缺乏生气的文章，哪怕无任何错误也不可能得高分。考生在写作时，可以巧变感叹句，增强语言的表达力；省略与替代交替使用，避免写作时不必要的重复与累赘，使句子更简练、精确；主动句与被动句交替使用，使句子更具多样性；分词（短语）及with复合结构结合使用，使得文章句子结构紧凑，描述形象生动，为文章增色。

"有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑"是高考书面表达重要的评分依据。
五校联考作文：
注重写作句式，提高写作能力
学生作文1：
As is shown in the picture above,the student is pessimistic about his study, even he don’t want to study at all, which surprises his teacher a lot.
As a matter of fact, it is a common condition among the students. Students often owes it to their low IQ rather than seek for their disadvantage. It will have a bad effect on their study.
In my view,study is a slow and hard process . To begin with, we should have a right attitude towards study. However hard study is, we as long as try our best to learn knowledge which can equip ourselves. In addition a good way to study is also important. Sometimes we can’t learn well. Why not change our way to study? Perhaps our changing can make a difference on our study.
To sum up, study matters for us a lot. We should take our study into consideration seriously. Don’t give up our study. Work harder and you will find that you can succeed.
学生作文2：
As is shown in the picture above, a teacher asked a student why he didn’t study. What the student said really shocked me a lot. The student said that he was too stupid to study.
Was it the reason that the student didn’t study? Of course not. As a matter of fact, most of people have the same IQ . However, some students are so lazy the they don’t want to study hard. In order to escape this responsibility, they blame it to their IQ. They make it to be believed that they are too stupid to study or make good progress. Day by day, their study become worse and worse.
As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that whether our IQ is high or not, we should study hard. And we should try our best to learn knowledge . Only by studying hard can we have the life that we want.