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In my community, there's a much-loved street cleaner named Paul Spiery. Since 2017, the 63-year-old has been dutifully cleaning our streets. As he sweeps, he always sings along with the melodious tunes of Elvis Presley （猫王）.Paul's beautiful voice floats in the air, adding a unique charm to our community.
Paul has developed deep and genuine friendships with many of us locals. I'm his best friend as we both love Elvis' songs. Whenever we express our gratitude to him, he always smiles brightly and says he's just doing his job. His presence has not only kept our roads clean but also lifted out spirits.
We, the neighbours, were deeply touched by Paul's hard work and positive attitude. So we decided to come together to give him a special gift. We managed to raise over £3,000 to send him on a holiday to Portugal a place he had always dreamed of revisiting since he had only been abroad once, and that was to Portugal.
However, our kind plan encountered a big problem. Paul's employer, a waste management company, stated that employees couldn't receive any gifts in the form of money other than their regular salary according to strict corporate rules. At this news, Paul said, “Well, rules are rules. It's okay. I'm grateful fbr what everyone has tried to do fbr me." He continued to sweep the floor, humming a song of Elvis Presley as usual.
We were all disappointed that Paul couldn't enjoy this well-deserved holiday as a reward for all his hard work for our community and determined to find a proper way to recognize Paul.
I posted Paul's story on social media, "Giving him this incredible gift would be a heartfelt way to show our appreciation for everything he does. Let's come together to make this dream happen fbr someone who truly deserves it." The post went viral and caught the attention of a package holiday company, OnTheBeach.
The manager of OnTheBeach got in touch with me, and put forward a proper way to recognize Paul.
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第一段： OnTheBeach announced online that it was to hold a special singing competition.
第二段：To Paul's relief, the waste management company had no objection to him accepting the win.
-Din _L, 又早大忌：
在社区备受喜爱的清洁工保罗，多年来边清扫街道边哼唱猫王歌曲，与居民结下 深厚情谊。居民为表感激，众筹3000多英镑想送他去葡萄牙度假，却因雇主公 司规定无法成行。失望之余，“我”将保罗故事发在社交媒体，引发关注， OnTheBeach公司提出举办特殊歌唱比赛。比赛要求唱猫王歌曲，各地人员踊跃 报名，都想帮保罗圆梦。最终公司同意保罗接受比赛获胜奖励，保罗得以踏上期 待已久的葡萄牙之旅，归来后更热情地清扫街道，与社区共享快乐。
伏笔及续写回应：
伏笔：保罗清扫时总哼唱猫王歌曲。
回应：歌唱比赛要求参赛者唱猫王歌曲，与保罗日常爱好呼应，既贴合他的风格, 又让比赛更具针对性，为他圆梦铺垫。
伏笔：保罗只出过一次国，且是去葡萄牙，一直梦想再去。
回应：比赛奖品设定为葡萄牙豪华度假套餐，精准对应他的梦想之地，满足他多 年心愿。
伏笔：居民众筹3000多英镑送保罗度假，体现大家的感激之情。
回应：虽因公司规定受阻，但这份心意促使“我”发社交媒体求助，引发后续一 系列帮助保罗的行动，是故事转折的源头。
伏笔：保罗雇主有严格公司规定，员工不能收金钱形式礼物。
回应：推动故事发展，让居民另寻办法，引出歌唱比赛这个创意，避免直接送钱 违规，使情节更曲折。
伏笔：“我”与保罗因都爱猫王歌曲成为好友，关系亲近。
回应：“我”更积极为保罗奔走，发社交媒体讲述他的故事，串联起整个帮助保 罗的行动，凸显友情力量。
续写要点：
第一段：详细描述比赛现场，如参赛者们的精彩表现，观众的热情反应，评委的 认真评判，强调比赛竞争的激烈程度，突出大家为帮保罗圆梦全力以赴。可举例 一些参赛者的特别表现，比如有小孩用稚嫩嗓音唱出经典韵味，有专业歌手也来 助力展现高超技艺。
第二段：写保罗得知能去度假后的准备过程，包括他激动的心情如何难以抑制， 和邻居们分享喜悦，收拾行李时的小心翼翼，仿佛已经置身葡萄牙感受美好。还 可提及他在葡萄牙的难忘经历，像参观名胜古迹、与当地人热情交流，回来后如 何将这份快乐回馈社区，如清扫更卖力，歌声更欢快，感染更多人。
情感线：
起初是居民对保罗辛勤工作的感激，众筹体现深厚情谊；遇阻时的失望；而后 “我”发社交媒体求助的急切；比赛筹备时众人的期待；保罗得知能度假的惊喜、 激动；度假归来的幸福、感恩，情感层层递进，丰富细腻。
故事线：
保罗日常清扫街道哼唱猫王歌曲获居民喜爱一居民众筹送度假遇阻一“我”发社 交媒体引关注一OnTheBeach办比赛一保罗终获度假机会一度假归来更积极生 活，故事线连贯曲折，引人入胜。
主旨升华句：
True kindness knows no bounds and can break through any obstacles to bring warmth to people's lives.（真正的善良无界限，能冲破任何障碍，为人们生活带来温暖。） In a community, it's the small acts of love and unity that create the most beautiful stories.（在一个社区中，正是那些小小的爱与团结之举创造了最美好的故事。） Sometimes, when one door closes, another one opens with the power of collective kindness.（有时，当一扇门关闭，集体善意的力量会打开另一扇门。）
The spirit of giving back is not only about receiving a reward but also about spreading happiness further.（回馈的精神不仅在于获得回报，更在于将快乐传递得更远。）
A simple act of appreciation can set off a chain reaction of love that enriches everyone's lives.（一个简单的感激之举能引发爱的连锁反应，丰富每个人的生 活。） 写作示范两篇： 第一篇：
OnTheBeach announced online that it was to hold a special singing competition. Contestants flocked to the registration desks, their eyes shining with determination. The day of the competition dawned bright and clear. The stage was bathed in colorful lights, and the audience filled every seat, buzzing with excitement. A young girl started the show, her small voice trembling slightly but hitting every note of the Elvis song with passion. As the competition progressed, professional singers and amateurs alike wowed the crowd. The judges, renowned music experts, scribbled notes intently. In the end, it was a neck-and-neck race, but one winner emerged, securing the dream holiday for Paul.
To Paul's relief, the waste management company had no objection to him accepting the win. When Paul got the news, he was speechless for a moment, then a huge grin spread across his face. He rushed to tell his neighbors, who hugged him tightly. Packing his suitcase, his hands shook with anticipation. In Portugal, he marveled at the ancient castles, tasted delicious local cuisine, and made friends with the locals. Returning home, he swept the streets with renewed energy, his Elvis tunes echoing louder, spreading the joy he had experienced.
弟—4篇：
OnTheBeach announced online that it was to hold a special singing competition. Word spread like wildfire, and soon the audition hall was filled with aspiring singers. The day of the event arrived, and the atmosphere was electric. Contestants from all walks of life took the stage. An elderly gentleman, with a voice full of nostalgia, brought the audience back in time with his rendition of the Elvis classic. The cheers and applause were deafening. The judges had a tough time deciding, as each performance was unique and heartfelt. Finally, the winner was announced, and the crowd erupted in jubilation.
To Paul's relief, the waste management company had no objection to him accepting the win. Paul could hardly believe his ears. Tears streamed down his face as he thanked everyone. He spent days preparing for the trip, sharing his excitement with the community. In Portugal, he walked along the sandy beaches, watched the sunset, and collected seashells as souvenirs. Back in the community, he was a changed man. His cleaning work became an art, his songs a melody of gratitude, inspiring everyone to cherish the simple joys of life and the power of kindness.
【答案】
OnTheBeach announced online that it was to hold a special singing competition. This event, which was designed fbr people who love Elvis Presley's music, offered a grand prize of a dream vacation to Portugal. Anyone who could sing Elvis's songs was welcome to join. Paul, who had a passion for Elvis and often sang while working, was encouraged by his friends to enter the contest. To everyone's delight, Paul performed wonderfully and won the hearts of the judges. As a result, he became the winner of the competition, earning the trip that he had longed for.
To Paul's relief, the waste management company had no objection to him accepting the win. The company thought it was a prize for his talent rather than a direct gift of money. After learning about his victory, Paul felt overjoyed and grateful. The news spread quickly, and many neighbors came to congratulate him. Paul, who was always modest, thanked everyone for their support. With this unexpected opportunity, Paul finally got to revisit Portugal, the place he had dreamed of seeing again. His achievement not only brought him personal joy but also made the whole community proud.