TEM4组句方面的问题.ppt

TEM4组句方面的问题
语法方面的问题
指代方面
在使用it, he, she, this, that, which, one等代词时,前面句子中应出现明确的先行词。
误:Many students want to get a very good job that can bring someone much money and reputation. (someone 改为 them)
误:People try to resist the influence of mercials, but it is often useless. (改为:this effort)
误:The father told the son that he was going to be late.
改为:The father said to the son, “I’m going to be late.”
The father said to the son, “You are going to be late.”
The son was told that his father was going to be late.
The son was told by his father that he was going to be late.
(B) 修饰方面
英语中的修饰语应紧靠被修饰的成分,并和它有明确的逻辑关系。
误: To keep the air clear in our city, we must move the factories that give off poisonous gases to the countryside.
正: To keep the air clear in our city, we must move the factories to the countryside if they give off poisonous gases.
误: With television, people can get information es from other parts of the world immediately.
正:With television, people can get information immediately from other parts of the world.
(C)一致方面
保持时态、人称、数等的一致性。
误:College graduates take a good position, a handsome salary and a satisfactory working condition into consideration when they chose a job.
正::College graduates take a good position, a handsome salary and a satisfactory working condition into consideration when they choose a job.
误:Whether one enjoys or resents mercials, we are actually bombarded with it every time when people turn on their TV.
正:Whether we enjoy or resent mercials, we are actually bombarded with them every time when we turn on our TV.
(D) 平行方面
保持语法结构一致
误:When universities and colleges put quality education into practice, students’ potential can be brought into full play.
正:When quality education is put into practice in universities and colleges, students’ potentials can be brought into full play.
误:The energy problem is currently of great concern to a nation, the world and human beings.
正:The energy problem is currently of great concern to a nation,