特级英语老师整理:初中英语作文满分句型,孩子考前必背! 句型一:分词作状语 Moved by the kids in the village, I decided to donate all my money to them. 被汶川的孩子们感动了,我决定把我所有的钱都捐给他们。 Seeing Dad working so hard, I could not help bursting into tears. 看到父亲工作这么辛苦,我忍不住潸然泪下。 点评:分词作状语可以用来替代时间、条件、原因等状语从句,让文章显得更加简洁,同时功底更深。 【分词作状语的用法】 当状语从句的主语与主句的主语一样时,可直接省略从句的主语,并把从句的谓语改成分词(主动语态改成现在分词,被动语态改成过去分词),从而构成分词作状语结构。 【例1】When I see Dad working so hard, I could not help bursting into tears. → Seeing Dad working so hard, I could not help bursting into tears. 【例2】Because I was moved by the kids in Wenchuan, I decided to donate all my money to them. → Moved by the kids in Wenchuan, I decided to donate all my money to them. 句型二:副词提前 Obviously, one of the best ways to keep healthy is to do sports. 显然,保持健康最好的方法之一是做运动。 Eventually, every child will leave home to lead his own life as a fully independent adult. 最终,每一个孩子都会离开家庭去过自己的生活,成为一个完全独立的成年人。 点评:如果要选一种最让人心生感触的句型,副词提前的做法即使不是最好,也是之一了。前置的副词让作者还没说出具体的事件,内心的想法已经呼之欲出。这正是这种无比简单的语法现象所焕发出的魅力所在。 除了提升情感效果之外,副词提前也是让文章结构清晰的一个非常好的办法。我们常用的firstly, furthermore, finally等等所谓的“逻辑词”都是属于这一种类型,童鞋们要时刻想着去用它。 【注意事项】 用来提前的必须是——副词! 除了上面给出来的2个例句之外,再分享一篇作文里一个较难的句子,作文题目是“我最难忘的回忆”。 【例】... Oddly enough, my most precious memory lies in the days when I was ill in hospital... 非常奇怪的是,我最珍贵的回忆发生在我生病住院的那些日子里。 句型三:动名词作主语 Listening to music enables us to feel relaxed. 听音乐可以让我们感觉放松。