雅思写作文章误区.doc

雅思写作文章误区
写了这么久的雅思作文，技巧和方法都到位了，写作分数为什么总是提不上去?今天为大家总结了那些年我们掉进的雅思写作的坑。下面小编就和大家分享雅思写作文章避开这几个误区，来欣赏一下吧。
雅思写作文章避开这几个误区
一、避免空洞的单词和词组
，完全可以被删掉。
比如：When all things are considered, young adults of today live more satisfyinglives than those of their parents, in my opinion。
这句话当中的“when all things are considered”和“in my opinion“都显得多余。完全可以去掉。改为：
Young adults of today live more satisfying lives than their parents。

例如：Due to the fact that our grandparents were under an obligation to helptheir parents, they did not have the options that young people have at thispoint in time。
“due to the fact that”就是一个很典型的繁琐的表达方式的例子，可以替换，简化为下面的表达方式：
Because our grandparents were obligated to help their parents, they did nothave the option
s that young people have now。
二、避免重复
1. 尽量避免重复使用同样的词汇。或者有的时候虽然词汇没有重复，但意思却有重复。这时候可以做一些简化的工作。
例如下面这个例子：The farm my grandfather grew up on was large in size。
large对一个farm来说就是size方面的large，所以in size可以去掉，改为：
The farm my grandfather grew up on was large。
更简洁的表达方式为：
My grandfather grew up on a large farm。

例如：My grandfather has said over and over again that he had to work on hisparents farm。
这里的over and over again就可以改为repeatedly，显得更为简洁：
My grandfather has said repeatedly that he had to work on his parents farm。
三、选择最恰当的语法结构
选择合适的语法结构可以使句子意思的表达更为精确和简练。虽然语法的多样性也很重要，但选择最恰当的语法结构仍然是更为重要的考虑