托福独立写作开头段的写法(精).doc

托福独立写作开头段的写法(精).docStructure
Main Idea
Reason I
Reason II
Conclusion
I^eauirement
T OG:
T Score 5
T An essay at this level largely accomplishes all of the following:
T Effectively address the topic and task,
T Is well organized and well developed, using dearly appropriate explanations, exemplifications, and/or details.
T Displays unity, progression, and coherence.
T Displays consistent facility in the use of language, demonstrating syntactic variety, appropriate word choice, and idiomatically, though it may have minor lexical or grammatical errors.
How ?
Effectively address the topic and .
Let people know what the topic is.
Show your personal opinion on the topic.
The details and examples to support your opinion.
Paratfraph I
Paraphrase the argument 改述原题
n. Main Idea发表自己的观点
m. Adverbial of Cause用一个原因状语简短地提及论据
a. Wtiat ttie topic is
T Displays consistent facility in the use of language, demonstrating syntactic variety, appropriate word choice.
topic —登就在颗目中；
为体现句法的多样性和用词的准确性，不能照抄原题；
需要对原题进行t合当而准确地改述，6Pparaphrase.
What is paraphrase ?
A paraphrase of something written or spoken is the same thing expressed in a different way. 《柯英汉双解大辞典》
e・o
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
How to paraphrase the topic?
形式与内容的严格对应
词与词的替换，-(synonym )
词类替换；(word-phrase )
词性替换(noun—verb, adjective--noun )
意义的对应
形式与内容的对应
a） i司与伺的替换（synonym ）
133. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
A person's childhood years （the time from birth to twelve years of age） are the most important years of a person's life.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Brainstorming:
a person's -- one's, someone's important -- significant, momentous
of a person's life -- in one's lifetime
Paraphrase:
One's childhood years are the most significant years in his lifetime.
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