HR商务英语基础培训.ppt

Private and Confidential 2008 HR 商务英语基础培训 Private and Confidential 招聘猎头 Recruitment Solutions 商务英语邮件处理商务英语口语交流人力资源商务词汇如何提高英语水平 Private and Confidential 商务英语邮件处理如何准确的写英文邮件首次给陌生客户发邮件案例 Private and Confidential 如何准确的写英文邮件文法 1. : Deciding to rescind the earlier estimate, our report was updated to include $40,000 for new equipment. ”应改为 Deciding to rescind our earlier estimate, we have updated our report to include $40,000 for new equipment. (We 决定呀, 不是 report.) Private and Confidential 如何准确的写英文邮件 2. 句子不要凌碎. 例子: He decided not to audit the last ten contracts. Because of our previous objections pliance. 应该连在一起. 3. ,不要浪费人家的精力啊. Private and Confidential 如何准确的写英文邮件 4. : He did not make repairs, however, he continued to monitor the equipment. 改为: He did not make repairs; however, he continued to monitor the equipment. . 好像 affect 和 effect, operative 和 operational 等等就要弄清楚才好用啦. Private and Confidential 如何准确的写英文邮件 6. 拼字正确. 有电脑拼字检查功能后,就更加不能偷懒. ,: MUST change to OS immediately. 外国人就觉得不礼貌和喝令人一样. 要强调的话,用底线,斜字,粗体就可以了. Private and Confidential 如何准确的写英文邮件 6. 拼字正确. 有电脑拼字检查功能后,就更加不能偷懒. ,: MUST change to OS immediately. 外国人就觉得不礼貌和喝令人一样. 要强调的话,用底线,斜字,粗体就可以了. Private and Confidential 如何准确的写英文邮件 B. 文体 1. ,用高中的英文就行,(15-20 字吧), 技术性的字,就更加要简单易明. Private and Confidential ,重要或强调的事情都放在信件或段落的开头,而句子就放在最尾. 例如: he was unable to attend the meeting personally, he forwarded his congratulations on cassette tape. forwarded his congratulations on cassette tape because he was unable to attend the meeting personally. 两者强调的事情就有分别了.