高考作文得分策略.ppt

e to our Class! for English Essay WritingFeatures of Good English EssaysFeatures of Good English Essays一篇好文章有什么特点?一篇好文章有什么特点?:要点全面. :语法正确并符合英语的表达习惯。:词汇短语丰富,结构多样,句型复杂。4. Logic/:恰当使用承上启下的词语和连接词,使全文流畅连贯,浑然一体。整体三部分IntroductionDiscussionConclusionThree parts of an essayProcedures for Writing English Essays四个步骤1、审题:内容(要点)体裁,人称、时态2、要点成句:(1)正确——符合英语语法和英语表达习惯。(2)好——丰富的词汇,. 联句成文::语法,拼写,字母大小写,标点符号..注意:(1) 开头的交代句与结尾的总结句,增强呼应.(2)牢记常识性套话的习惯表达.(3)谚语,成语联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况: 1)大小:近100户人家,约500口人。 2)变化:过去很穷,78年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。 3)教育:原来的学校很小,现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层,是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。注意:1)要点齐全,前后连贯。2)词数:100-120之间。Practice 书面表达:Ladies and gentlemen, e to our village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978. People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. The school here was very small. Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys . It is the most beautiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it. Thank and gentlemen,e to our school ! Ladies and gentlemen, e to our school! ①This village is very small. It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. ② It has changed a lot since 1978 ③. People here ④ are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look.① This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. ② However,it has changed a lot since 1978 ③ and has been developing very fast. People here ④live a much richer life than before . 书面表达:Now it is taking on a new the past, the school here was very small ⑤. ⑥ Now it has been rebuilt. ⑦The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys ⑧. It is the