托福独立写作-支持段.ppt

托福独立写作之支持段
why
. (第四版) P207
How Essays Are Scored
评分人会评估考生作文的质量,即评估考生如何展开论点、组织文章结构,并运用语言表达自己的观点。
展开论点就是用各种支持内容(包括事例、细节、理由等)来支持文章的观点。要得高分,就得按照评分指导的原则写作文---“很好地展开论点、运用恰当清晰的解释、例证和细节”。
what
组织结构:
1. 基本展开模式
内容展开:
2. 如何写作
3. 注意点
4. 练习
基本展开模式
TS+Exp+
一、主题句
二、解释
三、举例与细节
四、结论
Young people now are more likely to help others than young people were in the past.
(2013. 1. )
主题句示例
at home or working in the office. ()
Working at home is more convenient
or saving money.()
Traveling makes people healthier
主题句示例
should encourage their children to do their homework independently rather than help them to do it. ()
Allowing children to do their work independently helps build confidence.
主题句示例
should focus on the preservation of the environment than on the economic development. ()
The developing countries like Africa should focus on the economic development.
直接简短表达观点
避免婉转冗长
一、不用冗长模板
The first reason here should be…
二、适宜用短句:
people often go travelling, they will be healthier.
we talk about old people, I think they can be better taken care of if they live in the big cities.
主题句练习
2012年10月14日 NA
If parents want their children to perform well in school, they should limit the hours that their children spend watching TV.
TS:watching TV will distract students from their schoolwork.
主题句练习
2012年3月10日 NA
If you need to discuss upsetting or controversial problems with others, you will use e-mail or text messaging, OR use the telephone or voice-messaging.
TS:using text messaging to discuss such problems can help me calm down and think twice before arriving at a solution.