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新托福写作简介
 
新托福写作简介
 
 
•    阅读(Reading)：有3-5篇文章 （60-100M）
•    听力(Listening)：n of independence and of the suitability of living independently . The essay is unified and coherent . Sentence structure is varied , especially in paragraphs 2 and 3 . The writer does not use high-level vocabulary , but word choice is correct throughout . There are minor errors , but these in no way interrupt the flow or meaning of essay .
 
This essay has a rather informal , conversational tone and an argument that is coherently and fully developed . Sentence structure is varied throughout , and the writer consistently demonstrates command of language and English idioms , especially by using various informal expressions . The essay meets all the criteria for a score of 5 .
 
 
中英文对比
 
中英文对比
 
中文：情感分段
“一切的一，一的一切”都沉寂了。
人们都等待着，等待着奥运钟声的响起。从它响起的那一刻，中华大地沸腾了——它带了梦想，带来了兴旺。
在申奥成功的那天夜晚，欢喜和激动的我做了一个梦。梦中我来到了一个神秘而广袤的森林，遇到了五个亲密而又可爱的小伙伴，闪闪发光的那个站在中间，其他四个小伙围在他的四周，在他的照耀下共享着甜美的晚餐。
我来到旁边同他们交流一番后，才知道他们是奥运五福娃，然后问道：“你们是中国奥运的象征，那么奥运会的举办将会给你们带来什么呢？”
福娃贝贝张着大嘴，一蹦一跳地说：“它能让我喝到更新鲜、更纯净的水，更活泼、更健康地自由穿梭在绿水之间，游遍祖国的江河湖海，并带着我的祝福——繁荣，游向更宽阔、更遥远的海洋，直到生命的最后一刻。”
 
英文：逻辑分段
Most of us have formed an unrealistic picture of life on a desert island. We sometimes imagine a desert island to be a sort of paradise where the sun always shines. Life there is simple and good. Ripe fruit falls from the trees and you never have to work. The other side of the picture is quite the opposite. Life on a desert island is wretched. You either starve to death or live like Robinson Crusoe, waiting for a boat which never comes. Perhaps there is an element of truth in both these pictures, but few of us have had the opportunity to find out.
 
 
Modern sculpture rarely surprises us any more. The idea that modern art can only be seen in museums is mistaken. Even people who take no interest in art cannot have failed to notice examples of modern sculpture on display in public places.