MPA复习02.doc

写作技巧:句型变换 MBA 英语写作经常是困扰 MBA 考生的一个障碍,且是他们容易丢分的一个项目。在 MBA 联考英文考试中,作文的分数为 20 分, 占总分的 20 %。上海华宏 MBA 培训中心周老师从历年英文考试的实际情况看, MBA 考生的英语作文相对于英语考试的其他几个部分, 得分一直偏低。经过观察、分析和研究, 我们认为广大考生在这一方面的困扰主要源于他们在英文写作的认知上存在明显的误区以及由此带来的心理障碍, 这种认识上的偏差和心理上的障碍严重地妨碍了他们写作水平的提高。在不少人看来, 写作是一种深不可测的智力活动, 他们认为写作一定就是灵感的产物, 或是将要说的话变成书面的东西。华宏 MBA 周老师说基于这种认识,再加上对英语语言无把握,考生在时间和心理压力很大的情况下进行英文写作时, 经常会显得手足无措。评判作文的二个初级标准: 1. 词汇:用词面的宽 2. 结构:复杂句的量 3. 道地: how much Chinglish 【 Sample 1】 a. Reading makes us happy. b. Reading isa major source of human happiness. c. There is no doubt that reading isa major source of human happiness. 【 Sample 2】 a. The is very important in our lives and work. b. The is playing an increasingly important role in practically every aspect of our lives and work. c. It is obvious that the is playing an increasingly important role in practically every aspect of our lives and work. Improved: 1. Many rivers are so seriously polluted that there is no fish nor clean water can be found. 2. Teachers play such an important role in education that their social status should be improved. 3. She spent much less time studying than before, which is quite typical of senior students. 4. In many panies where people work mainly with their brains, more attention must be given to sports 5. One essential difference between those who eed and those who fail is the extent to which they take advantage of opportunities rather