03避免错误开头方式（工程类）-原稿.doc

PERSONAL STATEMENT
By Yang Fengjuan
1 previous Education:
When in the high school I first used puter, I was attracted by it. From then on, to e an expert in the field of electrical puter technology has been my favorite dream. In 2098, essfully passed the petitive examinations, especially in the mathematics I got the full score (120 out of 120), I was admitted by the Electronic Engineering Department of Tsinghua University which is the most distinguished university in China.(这是中国学生最喜欢的一中开头方式,可是并不符合statement的一般习惯,请学习修改稿的开头方法。)
During my academic years, I worked hardly (work hardly 与 work hard 的区别相信大家都知道,这样的错误是不可原谅的。)and obtained good scores in most courses, especially in the basic courses and major courses. When graduation, my overall GPA ranked the upper 10% among about 200 students.
Education at Tsinghua University emphasizes practice. In the third year of study, I applied to join the Lab. of Information Systems. In the lab I essfully designed "2Mb/s PCM Digital Interface (32 frames)" which was used in the analogue PBX (Private Branch Exchange). In 1993, I independently designed "Speech Signal Processing Card" which was used in the SUN SPARC station. This card's essful design solved the problem that the SUN SPARC station could not be used to the speech processing and the multimedia application. From these designs I accumulated the experience of hardware development and ma