遣词与造句 - 副本.ppt

遣词
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1. Some people suppose/think/believe /assume /deem that some lucky numbers can bring them good luck.
改:Some people take it for granted that some lucky numbers can bring them good luck.
Some people tend to /are inclined to believe /some lucky numbers can bring them good luck.
2. They think that numbers are just a mathematic symbol for counting. They are not mysterious at all.
改:They regard numbers simply as a mathematic symbols for counting. They are anything but a mystery.
3. In my opinion/ In my eyes/ To me, these “lucky numbers” cannot bring good luck to people at all.
改:Personally speaking / As far as I am concerned/ From my point of view, these “lucky numbers” cannot bring good luck to people at all.
4. I believe that good luck depends on talent and hard work.
改:I do believe that good luck depends on talent, as well as hard work.
I do believe that good luck depends on talent and hard work as well.
5. Speaking about reading selectively or extensively, people have different attitudes.
改:When being asked about reading selectively or extensively, different people have different perspectives on it.
When es to the issue of reading selectively or extensively, people’s attitudes vary from individual/ person to individual/ person.
Nowadays, people are divided on the questions as to whether we should read selectively or extensively.
6. With the development of modern science and technology, reading is playing a more and more important role in our daily life.
改:With the development of modern science and technology, reading is playing an increasingly crucial role in our daily life.
more and more people: an increasing number of people/ people, in growing numbers, …
many students: a great many students+谓语动词单数/ many a student +谓语动词单数
7. Since we must have all kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.
改: Since we must have a wide range of/ a variety of knowledge, we must read extensively.
8. In my opinion, both sides of the argument have their own