作文的修改与润色.ppt

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The poor old man living alone in the little cottage at the foot of the hill behind my house walked every day along the bank of the little river in front of my house.
思考:
这是一篇短文还是一个句子?
句子的主谓结构
The man
walked
poor old
living alone
in the little cottage
at the foot of the hill
behind my house
every day
along the bank of the little river
in front of my house.
句子变短文
The poor old man lived alone in the little cottage, which was at the foot of the hill behind my house. He walked every day along the bank of the little river, which is running through in front of my house.
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假设你是李华,你的澳大利亚朋友Dick听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担,来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息,写一封回信,谈一谈减给你的学习和生活带来的变化。
周末活动(减负前)
周末活动(减负后)
白天:上课、做作业
白天:参观博物馆、学习电脑、绘画等
晚上:做作业
晚上:看新闻、读书、看报
就寝时间:11:30
就寝时间:10:30
the reduce learning load I have some homework to do and attending classes at daytime.
the reduce learning load I have some homework to do and attending classes at daytime.
Before reducing learning load I had a lot of homework to do and attended endless classes in the daytime.
2. We all very like it.
We all like it very much.
3. I know you had heard of something about reduce learning load…
I know you heard of something about reducing learning load…
4. I could do nothing except lessons and homework.
I could do nothing but have classes and do homework.
5. In your letter you ask me about reducing learning load.
In your letter you asked me about reducing learning load.
6. Our weekend life e more colorful.
Our weekend life is ing more colorful.
Our weekend life has e more colorful.
7. What a tired day!
What a tiring day!
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