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Do you agree or disagree: children should spend all their time on studying and playing and they shouldn’t be required to help family with household chores, such as cooking etc. ()
题型:应不应该
角度:利弊分析
观点:让步段
开头:不同意孩子不帮家里干活。( 话题引入+展示争论的话题+ 我的观点及过渡)
Children are the hope of a family. They shoulder high expectations from their parents or even grandparents of ing versatile, getting ahead of peers, and eeding in their future lives. Those pushy parents pay a great deal of attention not only to their kids’ academic performance, but also to their physical condition, leaving almost no room for children to be engaged in household chores. As far as I am concerned, household chores mean a lot to a child’s overall development, which should not be overlooked. My reasons and examples are given below. (91 字)
中间段1:做家务可以锻炼孩子们动手能力。(主题句+说理论证+细节例子)
Firstly, household chores are conducive to cultivating children’s ability to do practical things. It is because although household chores are tiny and monotonous, they are so real and detailed, providing children with a good opportunity to be more down-­‐to-­‐earth. Numerous cases tell us that the nowadays society craves pragmatists and activists, rather than those who can achieve good grades at school but lack of the ability to put the theory into practice. For example, if a child wants to study abroad in the future, he or she ne