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引出话题To be of assistance or not, it indeed is debatable if artists deserve and require funding by the government  表明一个观点Firstly, I acknowledge that the benefits from artists and poets can enrich our everyday lives in so many different ways; otherwise our life would have been a lot drabber without them    
陈述并表明观点Any genuine artist most certainly deserves some form of aid and there can not be any doubt about that, however, whether they require government assistance is another issue altogether  Contrary to popular belief it seems to be that not all artists and literary personalities are wealthy, and most renowned personalities are deservedly rich and famous    
While the other large group of artists is neither rich nor famous, they do continue to produce the art works as for the passion and often the passion is what drives them  It would be ridiculous to think that any kind of financial incentives could power their creativity  However, not many of them are able to take up their passion on a full time basis because they cannot afford to  It is import to note that most creative artists are made, and were not born so  It is the vagaries of life & struggles that they have to face which fuels their creativity, in the process they need to mature into renowned to be an artist or a writer  When they do and when their work is recognized, there will not be any dearth of money or fame  
In my opinion, it would be criminal to take away this very drive and shun their creativity  Having said that, I do believe that they need to have some kind of incentives, it can be in the way of appreciation and opportunity to present their talent to the rest of the world  This could be done in various ways, for instance, giving tax incentives to amateur artists and writers or financial rebates in government owned auditoriums to stage their presentations    
In talking about artists in Australia, which has a concrete social security system in place to take care of all kinds of basic needs,