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　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Online Romance. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
　　1)伴随互联网普及，出现了很多网络恋情
　　2)大家对此褒贬不一
　　3)你见解
　　【思绪点拨】
　　本题属于提要式文字命题。提要第1点要求指出一个现象，提要第2点要求叙述大家对该现象所持不一样态度，提要第3点要求表明“我”见解，由此可判定本文应为对比选择型作文。
　　依据所给提要，本文应包含以下内容：描述网络恋情出现，引出大家对其不一样态度;对比叙述两种态度各自理由;表明“我”更倾向于哪种态度并说明理由。
　　【参考范文】
　　Online Romance
　　With the widespread of the Internet, there have appeared many online romances. The lovers meet over the Internet, date on the net and finally fall in love with each other. People’s opinions on it vary greatly.
　　Some people think online love is very romantic and exciting. It is an amazing thing that the Internet brings together two strange persons far away from each other. Moreover, they think that online romance, compared with realistic love, attaches more emphasis on the appeal to each other in spirit and involves less material conditions. However, many others think differently. In their eyes, the Internet is a virtual world, on which there impossibly exist real, enduring love since it is very difficult to tell the real from the fake by the Internet. Besides, they argue that pursuing online romance is sometimes very dangerous because there are many cheaters on the net.
　　As far as I am concerned, it is an easy and fast way for people to make new people by the Internet. However, people should have more protection and safety consciousness when making friends by the Internet. Don’t give out rashly your personal information to strangers on the net. And keep it in your mind that you should have more realistic knowledge of each other before starting a romance.
　　热点作文2
　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How to Make the Best Use of College Life. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chines