顾家北--微信推送词伙-2014年9月.docx

顾家北 微信推送词伙 2014年9月
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今天我推送的是SImon的范文的主体段落第一段的解析
Happiness is considered very important in life.
Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
主体部分第一段
1 Happiness is difficult to define because it means something different to each individual person. 2 Nobody canfully understand or experience another person’s feelings, and we all have ourown particular passions from which we take Some people,for example, derive a sense of satisfaction from earning money or achieving success,whereas for others, health and family are much more important. 4 At the same time, a range of other feelings, from excitement to peacefulness, may be associated with the idea of happiness, and 5 the same person may therefore feel happy in a variety of different ways.
学习点1：关于快乐的替换表达
Takepleasure from …获得快乐
Derive a sense of satisfaction …. 获得满足感
Experiencehappiness…感受快乐
可以看到，快乐的替换不仅是单词，还要注意和动词的匹配
学习点2：family 不需要加复数，因为本身就等于family members的意思
学习点3：whereas和while使用的时候，意思对称就可以，未必要结构对称。
第一个单句的主语是nobody, 第二个单句的主语是health and family
学习点4：遇到这种抽象的题目，考官在第三句话用了举例的方式，这个和我们上课强调的是一样的。
整个段落的结构是：
1 立场 2 解释 3 举例 4 并列的观点 5 重复立场
不难看见，我们上课的四句结构，其实很多考官在用，只是他们没有很好的总结，和贯彻使用，所以学生比较难学习。
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今天我推送的是SImon的范文的开头段解析
Happiness is considered very important in life.
Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?
开头段
It is no doubt true that the majority of people would like to be happy in their lives. While the personal nature of happiness makes it difficult to describe, there do seem to be some common needs that we all share with regard to experiencing or achieving happiness.
学习点1：SIMON的开头段基本上是我们上课的套路，第一句话背景，第二句话立场
学习点2：词伙， personal nature 个性
Common needs共同的需要
Achieve happiness获得快乐
学习点3：with regard to 的to是介词，所以后面要用动名词experiencing
学习点4：there do seem to be.. 里的seem “看起来是”，让语气变得不确定，显得客观
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今天我推送的是一个BBC的文章，关于商业选址，是不是可以用在离家工作的话题？
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