蜗牛作文 - 蜗牛作文.ppt

漫画作文书面表达指导下图是一幅与当前交通状况有关的漫画,请根据以下要求用英语写一篇短文。 1. 品味漫画中的幽默,适当发挥想象,描述漫画内容。 2. 分析造成这种现象的原因并提出建议。 3. 词数 150 左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。 Steps : 1. 读图 2. 解意 3. 谋篇细读题目、画面、文字读图& 下图是一幅与当前交通状况有关的漫画…解意体会寓意准确立意 Part Ⅰ Describe the picture Part Ⅱ Interpret the meaning (causes; effects) Part Ⅲ Give personal opinions (solutions ) 谋篇….They are climbing up a tree. One of them shouts, “ What a jam! We are not the slowest .You see? ” The other nods and agrees with him. On the highway, there are many cars: sports cars, saloon, hatchbacks, minivans and so on. Part I Describe the picture *抓住关键,准确立意。(忌白描无用细节) *理解文字,巧妙转换。(忌套用直接引语) ?指出汽车的速度比蜗牛爬行速度还要慢, 反应交通堵塞问题。 As we can see from the picture, two snails are talking about the traffic jam on a highway nearby. The highway is crowded with too many buses and cars. Snails, once considered as the slowest in nature , are now lucky to find cars even slower than them. What a vivid description the picture gives! — by 邢晨希 Part I Describe the picture Requirement 2 . 分析造成这种现象的原因并提出建议。 Which of the following can be included? A. 随着经济的发展,私家车越来越多。 B. 为方便出行,人们更多依赖私家车,导致交通阻塞。 C. 私家车的增多给环境带来污染。 D. 车越多,事故越多。 Part II Analyze the causes *看清要求,确定要点。(忌无中心,随意发挥)√√ Which of the following can be included? ,提倡步行和多用公共交通。 B. 骑自行车可以锻炼身体。 。 D. 政府应采取措施改善路况,如拓宽路面等。 Part III Propose some solutions √√*看清要求,确定要点。(忌无中心,随意发挥) 1. 买得起/拥有私家车 afford private cars / have cars of their own be rich enough to buy … 2. 车越来越多 an increasing number of cars be on the increase There has been a sharp increase in ... There has been a boom in … 3. 带来便捷 bring convenience to sb make our life more convenient It is convenient for sb to do sth Useful expressions for parts II & III: