OG实例提示考生简化开头结尾段 我们看一下OG书上的一个开头段例子: The importance of the issue raised by the posed statement, namely creating anew holiday for people, cannot be underestimated, as it concerns the very fabricof it stands, the issue of creating a new holiday raises profoundimplications for the , although the subject matter in generalcannot be dismissed lightheartedly, the perspective of the issue as presented bythe statement raises certain qualms regarding practical (create a newholiday)的重要性,属于赘述(redundancy),第三句并没有很直接给出立场,不符合评分标准中的“有效回答问题”。为了获得一个高分,我们需要避免赘述(redundancy)和偏题(digression)。 其次OG中有个2分的文章,截取每段的第一句话: In the following, I will illustrate my opinion by two of all, honest make the trust stronger between friends , telling a lie always makes things worse not only in work but alsoin family the