温故而知新
-----一模作文讲评
By Wang Lei
Learning objectives
Be able to
1. better structure your writing.
2. better summarize the material.
3. come up with ideas using two strategies.
请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
The Ministry of Education issued a notice on Nov. 22, 2019. According to the regulation, primary and middle school teachers are allowed to criticize and give proper punishment to students who violate school discipline, social order, laws and rules, as well as those who cause chaos. Should teachers be allowed to discipline students? Students share their opinions.
Su Hua
Teachers should be cautious in disciplining students. They can punish a student without violence but hurt the child psychologically for the rest of his life My daughter's teacher makes who forget to bring homework stand for an hour at their seat. I do believe the aim is student to feel ashamed and it is not acceptable.
Li Jiang
It is parents' responsibility to discipline the students, not teachers, because the teachers are not paid to discipline children, but to guide their learning, If necessary, teachers should manage situation in a way that is effective but does not replace the parents.
Zhang Ming
I think teachers should be allowed to discipline children in class to maintain an environment beneficial for learning. Here the word "discipline does not mean "punish". Teachers discipline children to lead them into what is believed to be correct thinking and action, rather than punish them.
[写作内容]
1. 用约30词概括上述信息的主要内容;
2. 你是否赞成“教师对违纪违规学生实施一定的惩戒”这一观点,并说明理由(至少两点);
3. 对如何有效阻止学生违纪违规提出你的建议(至少两点)。
[写作要求]
1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 不必写标题。
[评分标准]
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
道路千万条 审题第一条
作文写什么?
是什么?
为什么?
怎么办?
Writing Steps
1. 确定主题(是什么):
教师对违纪违规学生实施一定的惩戒。
2. 站定立场(为什么):
赞成/反对,理由。
3. 提出建议(怎么办):
如何阻止学生违纪违规。
Structure
Para. 1 summary of the material
Para. 2 your opinions and reasons
Para. 3 suggestions & conclusion
How to Write a
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