2022年3月托福写作题目.docx

Dead leaves covered the ground. (清楚生动)
　　Eg: The reason that he left college was that his health became impaired.
　　= Failing health compelled him to leave college. (简洁有力)
　　Eg: It was not long before he was very sorry that he had said what he had.










　　= He soon repented his words. (简洁有力)
　　4. Put statements in positive form
　　以确定的形式表达否定的意思, 避开运用平淡、毫无色调，迟疑不决和模糊其辞的语言。
　　Eg：He was not very often on time.
　　= He usually came late.
　　Eg: He did not think that studying Latin was much use.
　　= He thought the study of Latin useless.
　　Eg: The taming of the Shrew is rather weak in spots. Shakespeare does not portray Katharine as a very admirable character, nor does Bianca remain long in memory as an important character in Shakespeare’s works.
　　= The women in The Taming of the Shrew are unattractive. Katharine is disagreeable, Bianca insignificant.










　　5. Omit needless words
　　删除冗词
　　Vigorous writing is concise. A sentence should contain no unnecessary words, a paragraph no unnecessary sentences, for the same reason that a drawing should have no unnecessary lines and a machine no unnecessary parts. This requires not that the writer make all his sentences short, or that he avoid all detail and treat his subjects only in outline, but that every word tell.
　　有力的写作肯定简洁。
　　Owing to the fact that
　　=Since (because)
　　In spite of the fact that
　　=Though (although)
　　Call your attention to the fact that
　　=Remind you (notify you)