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一写一得
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合理延伸是获得高分方法之一
On Sunday， we ate some seafood that was 一写一得
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合理延伸是获得高分方法之一
On Sunday， we ate some seafood that was really tasty. My mother said that that was the most tasty seafood she had tasted! And we all agree with her。 Also， we bought some local things in order to keep the memory in the future。 (By 伍雯雯)（精品文档请下载）
多数同学缺点：很多句子太短，应整合为长句。
I swam in the blue sea。 My family enjoying the sea and the beach. The sunrise and sunset were very beautiful. So I took some photos about out activities and the Dajiao Gulf. （By 嘉豪）（精品文档请下载）
——-—- I swam in the blue sea while my family were enjoying the sea and the beach， which were so amazing/beautiful。 （精品文档请下载）
The sunrise and sunset were so beautiful that I couldn’t helping taking/// couldn't wait to take some photos about out activities and the Dajiao Gulf。（精品文档请下载）
It was really a nice holiday。 I’ll never forget it。 （精品文档请下载）
It was such a nice holiday that I’ll never forget it for the rest of my life ！ （精品文档请下载）
We swam in the sea, enjoyed the beautiful scenery。