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英文审稿意见汇总
　以下 12 点无轻重主次之分。每一点内容由总结性标题和代表性审稿人观法构成。
　1、目标和结果不明显。
　It is noted thatted.
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　12、语言问题（展现最多的问题）：
　有关语言的审稿人观法：
　◆ It is noted that your manuscript needs careful editing by someone with expertise in
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　technical English editing paying particular attention to English grammar, spelling, and sentence structure so that the goals and results of the study are clear to the reader. ◆ The authors must have their work reviewed by a proper translation/reviewing service before submission; only then can a proper review be performed. Most sentences contain grammatical and/or spelling mistakes or are not complete sentences. ◆ As presented, the writing is not acceptable for the journal.
　There are pro blems with sentence structure, verb tense, and clause construction. ◆ The English of your manuscript must be improved before resubmission. We str ongly suggest that you obtain assistance from a colleague who is well-versed i n English or whose native language is English. ◆ Please have someone competent in the English language and the subject matte r of your paper go over the paper and correct it. ? ◆ the quality of English