帮妈妈洗碗看图写话二年级
[wash a bowl]
【洗碗】
Lin Xiaojing
林晓婧
One day, the sky is cloudless, month in an
过了一会儿,水池里就有了许多泡泡,最后的碗最难洗上面粘了一些饭粒都干了。月月用手抠了抠,终于干净了!
Aunt heard news of sanded rustle earthquake sounds, walk into a kitchen to look, see month in and month out is washing a bowl, happy say to her: month in and month out, myself will wash. month in and month out is laughing to say: aunt you are so painstaking, I help you wash a bowl today. aunt listened, say happily: baby, is the red carbonado that I give you to do you to like most tonight good? month in and month out says at once: Is good? Become very happy in heart of month in and month out.
姑姑听见了沙沙沙地声音,走进厨房一看,看见月月在洗碗,就开心对她说:月月,我自己来洗。月月笑着说:姑姑您那么辛苦,今天我帮你洗碗。姑姑听了,开心地说:宝贝,今天晚上我给你做你最喜欢的红烧肉好不好?月月连忙说:好呀?月月心里乐开了花。
Pedagogic commment: Young writer point of view very extraordinary, be being written is aunt and little girl. Very marvellous, the meeting when the attention thinks aunt sees little girl is washing a bowl has what kind of expression.
教师评语:小作者角度很与众不同,写得是姑姑与小女孩。很棒,注意想想姑姑看见小女孩在洗碗时会有什么样的表情。
Chen Yuhong
陈雨虹
A day, small red after eating lunch with mom, small red see mom lies in the very weary look on sofa, the heart thinks: Mom worked I should do some of bu
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