英语作文修改.ppt

初中英语作文的修改
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名词的单复数问题:
1. …Joy found there was much fish in the lake.
water was so clear that they could see all kinds of fish.
place are very dry.
…Joy found there were many fish in the lake.
The water was so clear that they could see all kinds of fishes.
Many places are very dry.
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主谓一致问题
1. And now many rivers es very dirty.
2. Everything are going very well.
3. David with his little brother go to the park every Sunday.
4. There are a man teacher and two women teachers in the office.
And now many rivers e very dirty.
Everything is going very well.
David with his little brother goes to the park every Sunday
There is a man teacher and two women teachers in the office.
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时态和语态问题
1. Her mother jumped into the lake and swimed to last her mother saved Joy. They were all got wet.
2. Tom’s mother jumped into the water. She saves her daughter at last.
3. On Tree Planting Day,many trees planted in Yongan Park.
Her mother jumped into the lake and swam to last her mother saved Joy. They all got wet.
On Tree Planting Day,many trees were planted in Yongan Park.
Tom’s mother jumped into the water. She saved her daughter at last.
29th Olympic Games will hold in China.
The 29th Olympic Games will be held in China.
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Chinglish 现象
1. Last Sunday,Ann with her mother and brother went to a park. The park with a lake.
2. I and my classmates by bus to Dayang Foreign Language School.
Last Sunday,Ann went to a park with her mother and brother. There was a lake in the park.
My classmates and I took a bus to Dayang Foreign Language School.
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行文的逻辑性问题
1. At once, she jumped into the water to save her daughter with her mother’s help.
2. But she wasn’t careful, so that she fell into the river.
At once, she jumped