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EnglishpharmaceuticalthesisAboutantibioticsTitle:':datingfromveryancient(briefintroductionofitsdevelopment)Longlongago:TheancientEgyptians,theChinese(无定冠词),,eptanceofgermtheoryofdisease.(句子成分不全,片语)Thescientistsbegantobedevotedtotheresearchfordrugsthatwouldkillthesedisease-causingbacteria(bacteria-causingdisease).,,usaureuscouldbedestroyedbythemoldPenicilliumnotatum,,ThemanufacturingprocessforPenicillinGProcainewasinventedbyHowardFlorey(1898–1968)andErnstChain(1906–1979).,Florey,,firstsoldtheantibioticunderthetradenamesofAmoxicillin,Amoxil,:DuringWorldWar2,essfullymadethedeathofwoundinfectionslower.(essfullylowerthedeathrateofwoundinfections).EventheprimeministerofBritishChurchillhassaid: