雅思写作--雅思写作1.ppt

A Course：Writing for IELTS
About ME
Linguistics:
1. Grammar
2. Applied Linguistics
M论据：Supporting Evidence
论证：Reasoning
TA: Task Achievement (任务完成)--1
TR: Task Response (任务回应)--2
CC: Coherence & Cohesion
（内容连贯与篇章衔接）
GRA:
Grammatical
Range and Accuracy
（语法范围与精确性）
Scoring Criteria for Writing 写作评分标准
LR:Lexical Resource
（词汇资源）
语言能力
思维能力
I. 语法评分细则（GRA）Grammatical Range and Accuracy
语法错误
时态偏差
主谓一致
名词单复数及冠词匹配
代词误用与滥用
形容词、副词比较级句型错用
介词误用
动词形式误用
连词缺失及简单句或无主句泛滥
时态偏差
When I was a kid, I play soccer with my classmates.
The number of female smokers increase greatly in 2000.
主谓一致
Our government take measures to solve urban traffic problems.
Morality and academic knowledge is very important for young people nowadays.
Many environmental problems are caused by individual behaviours, which are undeniable.
名词单复数及冠词匹配
Informations are important.
That people is rich.
The China is a country which has long history.
代词误用与滥用
Somethings are important.
Somebody can do everything / something with computers.
He can complete it with it.
形容词、副词比较级句型错用
Some people think that English is important than Chinese.
Some people like English than the others.
介词误用
Some people are interested with English.
English has a great influence in worldwide communication.
动词形式误用
Take measures is necessary.
Some people are interested in learn English.
无主句泛滥
If take measures, the problem can be solved.
连词缺失 / 双谓语
There are many people believe that advanced technology has not had a positive influence on our lives.
Celebrities get high salaries are reasonable.
语态错误
Some people think that old buildings should preserve.
When natural disasters are happened, we cannot take any actions.
Grammatical Structure
The education system should not fail to be improved.
I consider that the education system should not fail to be improved.
I hold a view that the education system should not fail to be improved.
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