雅思写作--雅思写作2.ppt

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Mobile phones are frequently used
in almost all aspects of our daily lives.
However, a variety of potential problems including social, medical and technical ones arise, which far outweigh the benefits that they bring to people.
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When an emergency occurs,
mobile phones can help the victims
to call the police or ambulance immediately for help.
Mobile phones make people work faster and more efficiently
by sending or reading emails via a mobile phone.
Talking on mobile phone in public with high voice disturbs people around.
The radiation that a working mobile phone produces
has the potential to cause some diseases.
Using mobile phones on board
may affect the navigation system of the aircraft,
and will endanger the lives of the passengers.
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Admittedly, it is undeniable that mobile phones facilitate our lives in many different ways.
For one thing, when an emergency occurs,
such as a traffic accident or a violent crime, mobile phones can help the victims to call the police or ambulance immediately for help. For another, they make people work faster and more efficiently, as people can send or read emails via a mobile phone, and communicate quickly and easily with their clients and co-workers.
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On the other hand, there is an opinion that the wide application of mobile phones also exerts a negative influence on the society, an individual’s health and technological development. To begin with, it is the case that talking on cell phone in public with high voice dis