托福写作思路：改变环境.doc

托福写作思路:改变环境
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If you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
写作思路:
一个重要的改变就是改变环境,让它变的更好
(1)环境好能改善人的身体健康,很多人因为环境而生病
(2)环境好了,吸引更多的游客来旅游
(3)环境好能够促进经济发展,吸引更多的商人来投资
参考范文:
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People don't try to support others around them. They don't keep a friendly eyes on their children, or check in on older folks if they don't see them for a few days. They're not aware when people around them may be going through a hard time. For e