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托福高分写作范文
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托福高分写作范文第1篇
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Yourjobhasmoreeffectonyourhappinessthanyoursociallifedoes.
,,forme,ourjobhasagreaterinfluenceonourhappinessthanoursociallifedoes.(89)
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托福独立写作满分详解
摘要:托福独立写作满分详解为了便利宽阔考生更好的复习,智课教育综合整理了关于托福独立写作满分详解的相关内容,以供各位考生考试复习参考,希望对考生们的复习能够有所关怀。以下就是
为了便利宽阔考生更好的复习,智课教育综合整理了关于托福独立写作满分详解的相关内容,以供各位考生考试复习参考,希望对考生们的复习能够有所关怀。以下就是托福独立写作满分详解的具体内容,愿大家都能够取得自己满意的成果。
新托福TOEFL考试的最终一部分是“写作”,要求考生写2篇文章,第一篇叫做综合写作(Integratedwriting),让考生用3分钟时间先读一篇约250字的文章,然后听一段2分钟关于对所读内容的评论。再让考生写一篇
不少同学在独立写作部分可以拿到满分。考前的预备和模板的恰当应用是必不行少的,现提起笔给同学总结新托福TOEFL独立写作模板和高分写作技巧。

评分标准1:effectivelyaddressesthewritingtopicandtask.
要求考生有效地阐明主题,考生千万不要跑题。从笔者的教学阅历看,考生全部跑题现象较少,但是局部跑题现象特别严峻,这也是考生不能轻取高分的缘由。
评分标准2:wellorganizedandwelldeveloped
评分标准3:usesspecificdetailsandexamplestosupportyouview
考生的论据确定要具体、明确,且对论点有支持作用,而不能空洞和泛泛而谈。
评分标准4:displayslanguagefacilitybydemonstratingsyntacticvariety,wordchoiceandidiom.(通过谴词造句和习惯表达来呈现语言的娴熟程度)
这一点是各位考生经常忽视,迷惘和不清楚的一点。新托福TOEFL作文占总分120分的30分。我们对大家的要求是在作文上花的时间既要少又要拿高分,至少28分。凡是想拿到28分甚至满分以上的同学确定要留意此项评分标准。能用first千万不要用firstly,,能用常用的词千万不要用偏词,同时我们要娴熟把握ETS宠爱的5大语法结构和2种
从句。
作文要不要写?当然要写,但我建议考生不要写的太多,写一篇要像一篇,最好让行家改2-3篇。我曾经遇到一个同学把185篇中的180篇均写了。拿给我看,结果同样的错误在184篇均反复消逝,让我哭笑不得。学托福TOEFL需要勤奋,但像这种勤奋就即是铺张青春岁月。
作文要不要背?最好不要通篇背,可以背一些经典的句型。假如真要背,确定要认准此篇作文是范文的状况下才能背。
这4个评分标准哪条更重要?这主要取决于考生对作文考分的期看值。若要考满分,此4点均重要。千万不能跑题,一跑题可就是0分了。考试费也就白交了。
二、新托福TOEFL独立写作模板
留意:模板是死的,人是活的。文章的开头最好自己写。依据课上所讲的句式,怎么写都可以,只要保证正确,有确定的语法结构(如:从句,同位语,插进语等)
首段:将题目依据漏斗形思维模式进行同义改写,如名词改形容词,动词,现象阐述,内容解释等。后面的结构可以为:
Themainreasonformyviewisthat.
Firstofall,Second,
Finally,
So,.
Anotherreasonformyviewisthat.
Ononehand,.Forexample,
.Inaddition,.
Finally,.
(分理由1).(分理由2).
Inconclusion,basedonthereasonsIdiscussedabove,(pleaserewritethefirstparagraphinanotherway)...
新托福TOEFL写作并不难,不管你中文写作好还是不好,只要真正把握了写作方法和要求,再写出3-5篇作文。考个满分尽不是什么大惊小怪的事。关键缘由是同学们在把握了我们教的方法后一方面能从容应对写作,更能在写作中取得高分或满分的成果!
,至少在备战新托福TOEFL及新托福TOEFL写
人上没做到。
最终,在此祝同学在新托福TOEFL考试及新托福TOEFL写作中取得优异成果!
以上就是智课教育为大家整理的托福独立写作满分详解,特殊有用,信任这篇文章将对于你在以后的考试当中带来很大的关怀。
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Shouldacitytrytopreserveitsold,historicbuildingsordestroythemandreplacethemwithmodernbuildings?Usespecificreasonsandexamplestosupportyouropinion.
作文范文:
Itisacontroversialproblemthatwhetheracityshouldpreserveitsold,historicbuildingsordestroythemandreplacethemwithmodrnpeoplethinkthatacityshouldpreserveitsold,historicbuildingsbecausetheyarethewitnessofthepast,othersthinkthatacityshoulddestroythemandreplacethemwithmodernbuildingsbecausetheytakeupalotoffarasIamconcerned,Ipreferthepreviousideathattheold,historicbuildingsshouldbepreserved.
Althoughtheold,historicbuildingswouldtakeupalotofplacesandthemodernsocietywillneedtheseplacestobuildingthenewbuildingssuchasskyscrapers,theold,historicbuildingsarethewitnessoftheisknownthatamoderncitycomesfromthepasthistorywhichhadavaluableold,historicbuildingscouldtellpeoplewhathappenedinthepastandwhatwasthepastthat,peoplecouldgainkownledgeandexperiencetocontributetothemodernsocietybetter.
Theold,historicbuildingscouldalsobeofferedtocanbecometheteachingbasesforisnecessaryforchildrentoknowthepast,sothattheycankownbetteraboutthepresentaddition,childrenwillbeinterestedinthestrangestructureofthebuildingsandthefunnythingsinthebuildings,whichwillpromotethechilderntostudy.
Finally,thepreservedbuildingwouldoffertheimportantcluesforarcheologiststostudytheismorevaluabletomaintainthemwellthandestroythemtobuildnewones.
Inconclusion,theold,historicbuildingsshouldbepreservedforthereasonsisthattheyarethewitnessofthepast,thentheycouldteachchildrensomethingandlasttheyaretheimportantcluesforarcheologists.
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托福写作25分高分范文
托福作文题目:whetherborrowingmoneyfromafriendcanharmthefriendship.
具体托福作文如下:
Somepeoplethinkthatborrowingmoneyfromafriendwillharmtheirfriendship,butIdon’tthinkmyopinion,friendsshouldbelieveeachother,sotheywon’tmindlendingmoneytotheirfriends,anditcannotdoharmtotheirfriendship.
Friendsarethepeoplewhohavecloseconnecionswitheachother,wholikeandbelieveeach’smore,peopleshouldhelptheirfriendswhentheyareintrouble,forexample,whentheirparentsgetillseriously,andtheyarelackofmoney,itisnecessarytolendmoneytohelpwon’tharmtheirfriendship,onthecontrary,thisevencanstrengthentheir
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Coincidentwithmostpeople",,advertisingmaywastemoneyandcauseemotionaltortureofparentswhentheyfailtofulfilltheirchildren",nowadays,regardlessofwhatchildren"strueneed,,whenafamilyishavingapleasantdinnertogetheronChristmasEve,acartoonfigurelionkingwouldappearonscreenandholdatubofpopcorntoattractchildren",advertisingcoulddrawchildren",itmaycausesomeproblems;first,somechildrenmaybeeasytobedrawnintothecontentintheadvertising;second,ifchildrenareattractedbyitandtheyinsistonpurchasingitwhileparentsconsidertheproductsasapieceofmeaninglessjunk,,,,,mytwoyearoldyoungerbrotherisattractedtoTransformer,,thesetoysaremagic,,theyarejustnormaltoys;theycannotfly,climbmountainsorsavepeople",,theseadvertisinghasmisledanddistortedchildren’,thoughtherearesomeundeniablebenefitsofadvertisingforchildren;forexample,,,distorttheirvisiontowardrealityandevencausequarrelsandfinancialburdensforparents.
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Doestechnologymakechildrenlesscreativethaninthepast?
Areourkidsbecominglazierandlesscreative,lessimaginablethanbeforeasaconsequenceofhighlyadvancedtechnology?Myanswerisno,andjusttheopposite,technologyhasapparentlyassistedourkidstobecomemorecreative.
Firstandforemost,,childrencouldnoweasilygainaccesstoacademicdatabasesthroughiPadscreen,readclassicalworksonKindle,,thesewonderfulequipmentsandfacilitiesareneverashandyinthepast,,technologyhasprovidedthepossibilityforchildrentobemorecreative.
Second,,suchasPhotoshopforcreativegraphicdesign,Overtureforeasilycomposingapieceofmusic,3DMaxforbuildingupavirtualworld,etc..Allthesoftwarewereneverashandyastheyareatpresent,andthiswouldabsolutelyprovidesourchildrenaneffectivetoolforrealizingtheircreativity.