Figure2人物描写片段2.doc

Figure 2 （人物描写片段2）
Best answer 1.
Excitement and emotion as the decision of the flood embankment, go forward with greadig out of his pocket, and took out a box of matches, it was safely and just twice, straightened up, with a particularly loud voice said: "now the teacher doing the experiment!”
The classroom was The atmosphere was foul. Mr. Mao angrily stood in the doorway, his head is steaming, the tip of the nose with a few bright sweat to pick their eyebrows ablaze with anger, but down into a mouth. We see, he blinked in astonishment as the face froze, motionless, like in the movie "freeze”. A few of us were nailed to the ground like wood.
The old man is dexterous in his hands. A clay figurine in his hands was born, just a few minutes. See, he picked up a bunch of mud, first knead into a circle, and then gently rubbed hands, so that it becomes soft and smooth. Then rub it up, gradually separating the head, body and legs. His left hand to hold the right hand with the clay, at the top of the head, a clay figurine wearing a top hat just.
The above three paragraphs capture the most prominent characteristics of the action.
Example 1 was written by an old teacher with high myopia. The hem of the dress with lens cleaning ”, " rush in the dish, "hurry to find" pocket "action description, write a feature of old teachers of high myopia, the adverse action cable and a little” confused in two cases, mainly to seize the tempestuous life gas when the characteristics of facial expression to describe the. Such as: "angrily stood at the door”, "head steaming”, "pick up the eyebrows ablaze with anger" and "mouth drop”, "muscle motionless”, the angry facial expressions written in vivid and lifelike. Three is to seize the action characteristics of clay, wrote a clever old artist.
Three, use verbs accurately and appropriately.
Read the following paragraph and see the role of the words in the paragraph.
Quicker than words can tell. The athlete who fell to the ground, with one