英语作文中的典型错误.ppt

作文中的 典型错误 分析
一、词的用法与句型搭配不当
An Englishman teaches our English.
一位英国人教我们英语。
2. Just like bees produce honey teachers produce knowledge.
老师生产知识就象蜜蜂产蜜一样。
An Englishman teaches us English.
teach, give, pass, show, buy, sing, send, borrow, lend等有时跟一个宾语、有时须跟双宾语。
Just as bees produce honey teachers produce knowledge.
like不是连词,不能引导主谓结构。
3. Because in our city there are a lot of factories and many vehicles, so the atmosphere is very dirty. 因为我们城市有许多工厂和车辆,所以空气污浊。
 Because in our city there are a lot of factories and many vehicles, the atmosphere is very dirty.
 In our city there are a lot of factories and many vehicles, so the atmosphere is very dirty.
*because引导从句,连接主从结构,表示主从关系;而 so 连接并列结构, 表示并列关系,所以不能同时出现在一个句子里。
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Although in poor health, but she continued to carry out her duties.
尽管她身体不好,但她仍继续执行任务。
 Although in poor health, she continued to carry out her duties.
 She was in poor health, but she continued to carry out her duties.
4. I hope some chance to improve myself.
我希望有进修的机会。
 I hope for some chance to improve myself.
英语中只有hope +宾语从句或 hope for sth
没有hope sth的结构。
5. Her husband changed rude and selfish.
他们变得自私和粗暴。
They became/turned rude and selfish.
change 不是系动词,不能直接跟形容词。
7. He decided to put his energies to write.
他决定把精力投入写作。
 He decided to devote his energies to writing.
*英语中没有put one’s energies to do sth的结构。
*It is one thing to have theories, and another thing to put them into practice.
有理论是一回事,将它们付诸实践是另一回事。
8. If we want to construct our motherland to be a developed country, we also need money.
如果我们想把祖国建设成为一个发达国家,我们还需要资金。
 If we want to make our motherland a developed country, we also need money.
英语中没有construct sth to be +形容词的结构。
The teacher asked me to construct a sentence like this.
They wanted their buildings constructed in a way to look unnatural. ( )
9. I will furnish my new house to be more beautiful.
我将把我的新房子装饰的漂亮一些。
I will furnish it and make it beautiful.
*英语中没有furnish sth to be + 形容词的结构。
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