读后续写之心理描写和动作描写 (2).pptx

Phycology description and actions description
The continuous writing
1. Read and get main ideas.(5W+H)and(who met what problem).
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Steps of continuous writing
plots(情节);
the emotion changes
the given sentences
phycology ,
the surroundings
appearance
actions
conversation
I was overjoyed and ran three steps at once.
Flowers are smiling brightly, birds are crying joyfully.
My heart is as sweet as honey.
Her face is red, excitement in the heart, as a deer jumping with joy.
Laughter lingered around(萦绕) the room.
Phycology description
and enjoyment
personification
metaphor
mix with surroundings
He glared at me with burning eyes.
My head hummed, and my heart burned in my chest, and I wanted to pounce on him and punch him hard.
When he heard this, he immediately glared at me, his face full of blue veins.

I feel like I am floating in an ocean of sadness.
Tears are running down her cheek like a river.
Tony was suddenly thrown into a world of darkness and sank into hopelessness.
I sobbed slowly, my heart filled with despair.
It's raining in my heart.

exaggeration
simile
I was so scared that I couldn't even get out of the air. My heart was pounding like a rabbit bouncing around in my heart.
My heart seemed to jump out of my throat, my legs were too weak to stand, and I almost fell down several times.
She held her breath and did not move.
Her face turned pale and stood there tongue-tied.

Shame hitting, the woman kept silent, having no courage to look his husband in the eye.
Guilt and shame flowing in her mind, she didn't even dare to watch her husband in the eye, weeping in regret.
I froze. I could feel the heat rising into my cheeks, did I really just do that?

He put his hand over his mouth. His eyes were widely open for he couldn't believe what had happened.
The shock of the news quite took my breath away.
Raise my eyebrow

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