读后续写之语言描写.pptx

continuation writing POWERPOINT
读后续写之语言描写
Goose, goose, goose,
song to heaven.
White hair floating green water,
red palm poking clear waves.
景物，动作描写
Looking up, I find the moon bright;
Bowing, in homesickness I'm drowned
动作，环境，心理描写
Beneath the rosy clouds and scented mists
stood the young man, all dressed in black,
his eyebrows as dark as if painted with ink,
the hair above his temples
as sharply outlined as if cut with a knife.
那烟霞底下立着的玄衣青年，
眉如泼墨，鬓若刀裁。
——《三生三世十里桃花》
景物，外貌描写
比喻的修辞手法
Our legs were so heavy and cold that they felt like block of ice.
At one ponit we were so high that we found ourselves cycling through clouds.

Bricks covered the ground like red autumn leaves.
Slowly the city began to breathe again.
The country, covered with cherry flowers, looks as though it is covered with pink snow.
As Victor Hugo once said, “ Laughter is the sun that drives winter from the human face.”
充分利用教材的修辞素材
The _________cherry flowers, covered with_________ snow, look as if they were________ maids
rosy/pink
white
blushing/charming
描写作为记叙文的一种辅助的表达方式对加强文章的表现力发挥着重要的作用，它要求我们善于捕捉细节、刻画细节，有时还可以用上比喻、拟人、夸张等修辞手法。一篇好的作文往往因为一两处细节描写而出彩。描写分为：情感心理描写，动作描写，环境描写，神态外貌描写等
记叙文中描写的作用
Tip 1: Language database for describing feelings
smile
He is smiling
He wore a _______ smile on his face
The smile on his face shone like a_________.
His eyes __________with pleasure.
Unforgettable were his eyes that shone like diamonds and lips held in a steady smile.
shining
diamond
twinkled